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These are my fears
These are my efforts
Can you not see my tears?

Let me fail
Let me scream
Let me bleed
This is all I want and need

Let me run
Away from you
Let me lie
I don’t know what’s true

Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly

Let me run
Let me die
Let me fall
So I can lose it all

Keep me here
Against my will
So I can learn
Not to kill

Let me go
So you won’t know
What I do
Without you

Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly

I don’t know
What I want
I’m not a show
Or something to flaunt

Make up my mind
For me
And keep me blind
So I can die innocently

Go to sleep
So when you dream
I can down 11 pills
And die sleeping

Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 36 [informant] => blueeyedevil13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Companion

Contributed by blueeyedevil13 on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 05:54:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

These are my weaknesses
These are my fears
These are my efforts
Can you not see my tears?

Let me fail
Let me scream
Let me bleed
This is all I want and need

Let me run
Away from you
Let me lie
I don’t know what’s true

Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly

Let me run
Let me die
Let me fall
So I can lose it all

Keep me here
Against my will
So I can learn
Not to kill

Let me go
So you won’t know
What I do
Without you

Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly

I don’t know
What I want
I’m not a show
Or something to flaunt

Make up my mind
For me
And keep me blind
So I can die innocently

Go to sleep
So when you dream
I can down 11 pills
And die sleeping

Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly

Copyright Â© blueeyedevil13 ... [ 2005-04-25 05:54:08]
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Re: Companion (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:09:47 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
In other words ya don't know if you're comming or going.
Very good writing.
huggs,
emy
Oh yeah, I'd call it a masterpeice as ya just don't get this type of write every day.

Re: Companion (User Rating: 1 )
by mysonnet on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:55:33 AM AEST
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ouch. nicely written poem and it sounded quite sad.

Re: Companion (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:39:30 AM AEST
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amazing

Re: Companion (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:23:07 AM AEST
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Great write! I really can't understand why this is one of the least read poems as it's great.Keep up the good work.

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