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Array ( [sid] => 92181 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOVE mommy [time] => 2005-04-25 04:28:32 [hometext] => written 4 years ago when i lost what would have been my 1st born child [bodytext] => to the part of me I lost
I'm sorry your lil soul paid that cost
how i wish things could be different
and i'd still have you here
i didn't ming the morning visits
to lose the meals i hadn't eaten
i didn't mind the dizzy spells
but i guess it was the way i could tell
my lil precious baby boy was there
I'm so sorry daddy didn't care
and maybe thats the reason you
made your mind up not to stay
please my angel never doubt
that mommys heart and mommys love are all about
the tiny baby boy
wo filled me with so much joy
But now you are with the angels
and you rest in grandpa's arms
kiss them for mommy
I'm sorry my lil angel
that you never got to lay in my arms
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 39 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

LOVE mommy

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 04:28:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

to the part of me I lost
I'm sorry your lil soul paid that cost
how i wish things could be different
and i'd still have you here
i didn't ming the morning visits
to lose the meals i hadn't eaten
i didn't mind the dizzy spells
but i guess it was the way i could tell
my lil precious baby boy was there
I'm so sorry daddy didn't care
and maybe thats the reason you
made your mind up not to stay
please my angel never doubt
that mommys heart and mommys love are all about
the tiny baby boy
wo filled me with so much joy
But now you are with the angels
and you rest in grandpa's arms
kiss them for mommy
I'm sorry my lil angel
that you never got to lay in my arms

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-04-25 04:28:32]
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Re: LOVE mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by sandysandysandy on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 04:37:42 AM AEST
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My nose tingles... Tears roll down,
As I felt your love for your child.
I believe with alllllllll of my heart, That he can't wait to see his mommy, when you take your trip there. what a joy that will be... GREAT WRITE.

Re: LOVE mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by EROTICADARLIN on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:49:05 AM AEST
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Great write! You will one day be with your son. He is watchin over you from above showerin you with his love!!

Re: LOVE mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:44:00 PM AEST
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very touching poem, can definitely feel the sadness in it, great write!

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