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Array ( [sid] => 92171 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rockets in Air [time] => 2005-04-25 01:16:14 [hometext] => I have no notes, really. [bodytext] => On that remembered hot summer day
The 238th anniversary of when Britains rule went away
Firework wars were the trend
It was me, my brother, cousin, and friends

As the fuse dwindled away
I knew the bottle rocket would soon blast away
I was aiming for my cousin Zack
Then all of a sudden, whoosh, and then whack

The rocket nailed him in the shoulder
The pain he did not feel only made us grow bolder
Now we found our selves tossing fire crackers near each others head
Not far, but close to each other instead

We found our selves throwing fire crackers at each other till the end of the night
We were have so much fun that we never got in a fight
Even when the fire crackers blew up in our face
We just looked at each other with disgrace

We finally returned home
All we could hear was constant ringing in our dome
I closed my eyes to sleep
Then I woke up to the annoying beep beep beep [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 60 [informant] => laukala [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Rockets in Air

Contributed by laukala on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 01:16:14 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

On that remembered hot summer day
The 238th anniversary of when Britains rule went away
Firework wars were the trend
It was me, my brother, cousin, and friends

As the fuse dwindled away
I knew the bottle rocket would soon blast away
I was aiming for my cousin Zack
Then all of a sudden, whoosh, and then whack

The rocket nailed him in the shoulder
The pain he did not feel only made us grow bolder
Now we found our selves tossing fire crackers near each others head
Not far, but close to each other instead

We found our selves throwing fire crackers at each other till the end of the night
We were have so much fun that we never got in a fight
Even when the fire crackers blew up in our face
We just looked at each other with disgrace

We finally returned home
All we could hear was constant ringing in our dome
I closed my eyes to sleep
Then I woke up to the annoying beep beep beep

Copyright © laukala ... [ 2005-04-25 01:16:14]
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Re: Rockets in Air (User Rating: 1 )
by handsomeheart2000 on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 01:50:03 AM AEST
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Awesome poem , you are good at words.

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