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Array ( [sid] => 9217 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => With These Hands [time] => 2002-12-25 18:20:00 [hometext] => A little confidence I dug up from somewhere inside of me. It's just another breakup. I've been through my fair share, I can get through another one. Happy holidays. :) [bodytext] => With these hands I will love
And nothing is ever after
And people will make me hurt
And I will store up all my love
Until with this heart and with these hands
I can offer it once again

Heartache hurts and heartache breaks
But I won't fall apart tonight
And I won't reach for the phone
Every time I feel alone
And I won't turn off the radio
When a song reminds me of him

I am still beautiful
And I'm no second-hand lover
If I take you by the hand
I'll pull you in and touch you twice
I'll make you mine till the day I die
I just haven't found you yet

I won't be dependent
I am strong and I can manage
In these moments of solitude
I am all I have to give
Someday someone will see me for me
They'll find something special in me

I could be a hero
If you could see how deep I feel
And taste my love, you'd want more
You won't find anyone like me
All I hold in my hands could be yours
If I decide I want you for mine [comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 19 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
With These Hands

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



With these hands I will love
And nothing is ever after
And people will make me hurt
And I will store up all my love
Until with this heart and with these hands
I can offer it once again

Heartache hurts and heartache breaks
But I won't fall apart tonight
And I won't reach for the phone
Every time I feel alone
And I won't turn off the radio
When a song reminds me of him

I am still beautiful
And I'm no second-hand lover
If I take you by the hand
I'll pull you in and touch you twice
I'll make you mine till the day I die
I just haven't found you yet

I won't be dependent
I am strong and I can manage
In these moments of solitude
I am all I have to give
Someday someone will see me for me
They'll find something special in me

I could be a hero
If you could see how deep I feel
And taste my love, you'd want more
You won't find anyone like me
All I hold in my hands could be yours
If I decide I want you for mine




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2002-12-25 18:20:00]
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Re: With These Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 06:57:39 PM AEST
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Dearest MoonlitAngel @-<-<<-
Ohhh this is a lovely poem, great flow and as always; love your style:) Happiest Holidays to you too my friend,
always Nessa


Re: With These Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 11:40:54 PM AEST
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Awww, Dee. This is a wonderful poem. It totally says you. So much emotion in it. And it flows beautifully. This may be your best yet.

Love always and forever,
Em

Ps. Love the photo album you gave me. I'm gonna fill it with pics of us :)


Re: With These Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 10:25:18 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written i really enjoyed this one alot...it has such beautiful wording in it and emotions and heart...and it's full of hope..and strength....thanks for sharing this one...i enjoyed it alot....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: With These Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:08:25 AM AEST
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Third stanza is an excellent stanza. its a beautiful poem.


Re: With These Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 01:11:07 AM AEST
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Have to agree with venkat on this one.lol.Third stanza..It pulled ME in and touched me twice...All over a great lil write...Love the emotion..and.honesty:)




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