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Array ( [sid] => 92168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Work In Progress [time] => 2005-04-25 00:11:33 [hometext] => it's a work in progress but here's what i have so far [bodytext] => Sometimes when I am not alone the loneliness consumes me
When by myself the feeling seems even more rapid through me
I watch the world and sometimes wish the doctors would white room me
Either that or fix my pain and smiling they’d debut me
Looking out the window, and seeing gorgeous things so splendid
Other people’s fascination with gothic art has long time ended
No one understands my art and many get offended
But in the ugly I see beauty that appearance has transcended
I have a fear of conflict and I bottle feelings in
If something bothers me about you, I’ll keep my thoughts within
Sometimes I’ll have an outburst, but I try to keep a grin
It’s so easy to cross the line, the line it is so thin
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Work In Progress

Contributed by anonymussme on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:11:33 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Sometimes when I am not alone the loneliness consumes me
When by myself the feeling seems even more rapid through me
I watch the world and sometimes wish the doctors would white room me
Either that or fix my pain and smiling they’d debut me
Looking out the window, and seeing gorgeous things so splendid
Other people’s fascination with gothic art has long time ended
No one understands my art and many get offended
But in the ugly I see beauty that appearance has transcended
I have a fear of conflict and I bottle feelings in
If something bothers me about you, I’ll keep my thoughts within
Sometimes I’ll have an outburst, but I try to keep a grin
It’s so easy to cross the line, the line it is so thin

Copyright Â© anonymussme ... [ 2005-04-25 00:11:33]
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Re: Work In Progress (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:30:26 AM AEST
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So true so very true.
wise words.
great write.

Re: Work In Progress (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:52:41 AM AEST
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I don't pretend to understand or know gothic but that doesn't give me or anyone else the right to be judgemental.
I agree with the holding in part 'cause I feel if I have nothing good to say it's better not to say anything at all. That shows me at least that u r a very considerate person.
so those that get offiended could learn from your personality. To me that's a very positive traite for anyone to have no matter what label behind a poem or anything.
I gave u five stars.
huggs,
emy

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