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Array ( [sid] => 92150 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fear of Darkness [time] => 2005-04-24 21:17:59 [hometext] => This is a true event, for it really happened to me [bodytext] => In the light, I stood
where things always became bright
The sun shining down, brought
a smile to see the white.

The heat hovering in the air,
created by the sun, Where I
enjoyed to stare , made me
feel warmth inside, as I felt
such confide

But when the sun goes away,
cold comes created by skies
that turned pure grey, as the night
came, I began to feel more plight.

Finally entering darkness, the night became.
The one thing, that I could see, was black,
fear digging at me, making the attack

The confidence I once had, vanished
All visions of light then banished
Hearing the foot steps of something
lurking toward me. as I stood
freezing, When I became Seized
by complete fear

having self control, I tried to step back
but then the growling appeared
making me feel like I was trapped
Not to see what was before you, made it
all so worse,that I couldn't see
what I tried to pursue.

As the foot steps began to pick up
faster toward me, the steps sounding
like tree branches collapsing against the ground.

The growling from what was forth, became much louder
Not sounding like a human, nor an animal,
Feeling the wind from the movement of what was coming

Where I finally picked up, and forcefully drove my body
To where light was, For when i had entered the light
the one that chased disappeared, as my face became
a pale white, holding my chest as I breathed in so tight

The fear of the darkness stayed, the one whom appeared
in black wasn't seen again, for the light shined on me
Forever more. hoping that one thing won't be seen in sight.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 51 [informant] => justingunshin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
Fear of Darkness

Contributed by justingunshin on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:17:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Event



In the light, I stood
where things always became bright
The sun shining down, brought
a smile to see the white.

The heat hovering in the air,
created by the sun, Where I
enjoyed to stare , made me
feel warmth inside, as I felt
such confide

But when the sun goes away,
cold comes created by skies
that turned pure grey, as the night
came, I began to feel more plight.

Finally entering darkness, the night became.
The one thing, that I could see, was black,
fear digging at me, making the attack

The confidence I once had, vanished
All visions of light then banished
Hearing the foot steps of something
lurking toward me. as I stood
freezing, When I became Seized
by complete fear

having self control, I tried to step back
but then the growling appeared
making me feel like I was trapped
Not to see what was before you, made it
all so worse,that I couldn't see
what I tried to pursue.

As the foot steps began to pick up
faster toward me, the steps sounding
like tree branches collapsing against the ground.

The growling from what was forth, became much louder
Not sounding like a human, nor an animal,
Feeling the wind from the movement of what was coming

Where I finally picked up, and forcefully drove my body
To where light was, For when i had entered the light
the one that chased disappeared, as my face became
a pale white, holding my chest as I breathed in so tight

The fear of the darkness stayed, the one whom appeared
in black wasn't seen again, for the light shined on me
Forever more. hoping that one thing won't be seen in sight.




Copyright © justingunshin ... [ 2005-04-24 21:17:59]
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Re: Fear of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:49:35 PM AEST
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Wow, sounds like that really traumatized you.

Glad the light came in time to "save" you from the dark...

WEll wriiten :D

Love ya,
~Kiela~


Re: Fear of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:11:50 PM AEST
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I see you wrote a poem about what happened to you Justin.It is a very good write.

hugs

love mom


Re: Fear of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:54:32 PM AEST
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very artsy way of encapsulating the event, wonderful writing style!
~Remy~


Re: Fear of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:29:30 PM AEST
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Sounds like something not easily forgotten. Way to go for penning it.

Andrew




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