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Array ( [sid] => 92148 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Trust is Shattered [time] => 2005-04-24 20:56:52 [hometext] => I guess we can't trust everyone. Even the ones who assure you you are their friend. [bodytext] => I trusted you like no one else
You assured me you were true to your word
I guess we all know how that ends
You go against what you said

You assured me that you were there
Even when I didn’t want to talk
You were a great friend to me
But I guess I was someone you just forgot

It got out of control when you got a major crush on someone
Now you talk just to her,
Not your best friend of three years
I guess she’s more important, huh?

You never talk to me anymore
I guess I have just lost another friend
But don’t worry about me
I have others who care about me

I know they care
Because they can face me in person
They are good friends
I hope that someday I can trust you again

But, you obviously don’t care
I miss you, friend
But, oh well, maybe we will be friends again soon
I hope to God we will be
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => sprinter27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
My Trust is Shattered

Contributed by sprinter27 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:56:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I trusted you like no one else
You assured me you were true to your word
I guess we all know how that ends
You go against what you said

You assured me that you were there
Even when I didn’t want to talk
You were a great friend to me
But I guess I was someone you just forgot

It got out of control when you got a major crush on someone
Now you talk just to her,
Not your best friend of three years
I guess she’s more important, huh?

You never talk to me anymore
I guess I have just lost another friend
But don’t worry about me
I have others who care about me

I know they care
Because they can face me in person
They are good friends
I hope that someday I can trust you again

But, you obviously don’t care
I miss you, friend
But, oh well, maybe we will be friends again soon
I hope to God we will be




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Re: My Trust is Shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:46:29 PM AEST
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just a bit confused... whos this about? sry about my nosiness but really... whos the who in this poem? j/w. great writing tho... i really could say this same thing about someone else and you, of course, know who that is...
jennie... and youre right... we DO care... im glad we got that straight now... whew.


Re: My Trust is Shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:14:56 PM AEST
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FRIENDS COME & GO & SOME JUST PUT YOU ON HOLD! IF THEY'RE REALLY YOUR FRIEND THEN THEY SHOULD BE THERE TILL THE END!! GOOD OR BAD,LOVE OR HATE,THEN YOUR FRIENDSHIP SHOULD OF HAVE COME IN FIRST PLACE!!! TAKE CARE & GOOD LUCK I HOPE IT WORKS OUT!!!!

DAN!!!!!




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