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Array ( [sid] => 92138 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dust In The Wind [time] => 2005-04-24 18:12:08 [hometext] => I wrote this poem, after bullying . My teacher tlaks so much about it . And then in the news, a girl was found dead after she was bullied like crazy. She killed herself. [bodytext] => _ starts here :

No one knows her pain that hides
No one cares to look inside
This girl they see is quite unique
They look and stare afraid to speak

I can see the sadness in her eyes
As she grabs her books and passes by
Sounds of laughter in the hall
As they watch this girl suddenly fall

Her eyes begin to fill with tears
So I help her up to free her fears
No one knows how hard it is
For this girl to everyday live

Every night she prays to die
So she could no longer cry
And every day that she wakes
She looks across the dark green lake

Wonders if he will hear her plea
So she may live in harmony
No one knew she lost all hope
Until they found her by a rope . [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 43 [informant] => broken_hearted_loser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Dust In The Wind

Contributed by broken_hearted_loser on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:12:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

_ starts here :

No one knows her pain that hides
No one cares to look inside
This girl they see is quite unique
They look and stare afraid to speak

I can see the sadness in her eyes
As she grabs her books and passes by
Sounds of laughter in the hall
As they watch this girl suddenly fall

Her eyes begin to fill with tears
So I help her up to free her fears
No one knows how hard it is
For this girl to everyday live

Every night she prays to die
So she could no longer cry
And every day that she wakes
She looks across the dark green lake

Wonders if he will hear her plea
So she may live in harmony
No one knew she lost all hope
Until they found her by a rope .

Copyright © broken_hearted_loser ... [ 2005-04-24 18:12:08]
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Re: Dust In The Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:42:37 PM AEST
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tears are flowing down my cheeks this is so very sad and you wrote it with great talent the emotions seeped through
Michelle

Re: Dust In The Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by jessejames on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:18:06 PM AEST
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nice poem

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