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Array ( [sid] => 92130 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye to You [time] => 2005-04-24 16:12:40 [hometext] => This poem is for many of my friends and family members that taught me how it felt to be abandoned and alone [bodytext] => Do you know how I feel?
I don't think you do.
If you did you'd be here to comfort me,
and your not.
Where are you?
Do you not hear my screaming?
Do you not hear me cries for your guidance?
Why aren't you responding?
Before if I needed you,
you were there,
now your nowhere to be found.
Why is that?
Are you too hiding from everyone?
Are you to hiding from yourself?
I know how that feels,
everyday I hide.
I don't let anyone into my heart anymore,
which is partially your fault.
I told you everything,
you knew me well,
you knew what I was going through,
then you turned around and broke my trust time and time again.
Why would you do that?
I confided in you,
I trusted you,
I loved you,
and you broke me.
You made me worse when you were suppose to help me get better.
How could you do that to me?
Now your nothing to me,
your vapor,
I'm slowly erasing you from my memories,
never again will you ever have the chance to me.
Your gone,
your nothing,
nothing but a stranger. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 65 [informant] => TearzNscarz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Goodbye to You

Contributed by TearzNscarz on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:12:40 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Do you know how I feel?
I don't think you do.
If you did you'd be here to comfort me,
and your not.
Where are you?
Do you not hear my screaming?
Do you not hear me cries for your guidance?
Why aren't you responding?
Before if I needed you,
you were there,
now your nowhere to be found.
Why is that?
Are you too hiding from everyone?
Are you to hiding from yourself?
I know how that feels,
everyday I hide.
I don't let anyone into my heart anymore,
which is partially your fault.
I told you everything,
you knew me well,
you knew what I was going through,
then you turned around and broke my trust time and time again.
Why would you do that?
I confided in you,
I trusted you,
I loved you,
and you broke me.
You made me worse when you were suppose to help me get better.
How could you do that to me?
Now your nothing to me,
your vapor,
I'm slowly erasing you from my memories,
never again will you ever have the chance to me.
Your gone,
your nothing,
nothing but a stranger.

Copyright © TearzNscarz ... [ 2005-04-24 16:12:40]
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Re: Goodbye to You (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:24:55 PM AEST
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OUCH! A BROKEN TRUST ALSO MEANS A BROKEN HEART TOO!! I KNOW HOW IT FEELS I'VE BEEN THRU IT OVER & OVER AGAIN!!! IT'S NOT RIGHT & I THINK IT JUST BITES!!!! COOL POEM WITH A GREAT THOUGHT !!!!!

DAN!!!!!!

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