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Array ( [sid] => 9213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Only i can see your heart [time] => 2002-12-25 17:00:00 [hometext] => I'm not real sure aboutthis one...kinda private...You probably wont understand...unique feeling...hope u like [bodytext] => I've tried so hard to help you out,
To do the right thing,
Help you purify your heart,
And let your soul sing.

It happened overnight, it seemed,
I didn't see it comming,
Changes past my wildest dreams,
Keeping my heart drumming.

You shocked me and all you knew,
It hurt me inside.
That all your abilities and what you could do,
Could leave me, shocked, behind.

But randomly your heart shines through,
And only I can see your heart,
But then you change back as if you know,
That I'm watching and playing a part. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 49 [informant] => emmafarah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Only i can see your heart

Contributed by emmafarah on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

I've tried so hard to help you out,
To do the right thing,
Help you purify your heart,
And let your soul sing.

It happened overnight, it seemed,
I didn't see it comming,
Changes past my wildest dreams,
Keeping my heart drumming.

You shocked me and all you knew,
It hurt me inside.
That all your abilities and what you could do,
Could leave me, shocked, behind.

But randomly your heart shines through,
And only I can see your heart,
But then you change back as if you know,
That I'm watching and playing a part.

Copyright © emmafarah ... [ 2002-12-25 17:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Only i can see your heart (User Rating: 1 )
by tollo on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 06:19:10 PM AEST
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beautifly writen pome......I could only guss who you wrote this one about.
^_^TOLLO

Re: Only i can see your heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emmafarah on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 02:16:46 AM AEST
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excuse u?what r u talking about...honestly...

Re: Only i can see your heart (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:45:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful write emma although i must say that you are right i guess you are the only one who understands this one, although i know it has somthing to do with the other person shocking you .....hope it all works out for you.....thanks for sharing this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Only i can see your heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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Great write, Emma... I loved it..
Jenni

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