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haunting you, while you sleep in your bed
when your eyes close, I will make the darkness
spread

Looking over you, the watcher from
the dark, what twisted tales, come
before you, for you to embark

The glistening red, covered in blood
Demon images will flood your vision
flooded down with your own derision

Where I beckon the pictures of hate
So you can sleep with desecrate
Fear is what draws me, call me forth
I will come, you the bait will feed
my hate

For when you close your eyes
you are in your own demise
the control I will have
nothing will save you from blight
The master of nightmares....
Has you in a grasp, very tight. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 13 [informant] => justingunshin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Master of Nightmares

Contributed by justingunshin on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:06:12 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Being a shadow, a picture from your head
haunting you, while you sleep in your bed
when your eyes close, I will make the darkness
spread

Looking over you, the watcher from
the dark, what twisted tales, come
before you, for you to embark

The glistening red, covered in blood
Demon images will flood your vision
flooded down with your own derision

Where I beckon the pictures of hate
So you can sleep with desecrate
Fear is what draws me, call me forth
I will come, you the bait will feed
my hate

For when you close your eyes
you are in your own demise
the control I will have
nothing will save you from blight
The master of nightmares....
Has you in a grasp, very tight.

Copyright © justingunshin ... [ 2005-04-24 01:06:12]
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Re: Master of Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:01:07 AM AEST
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*shudders*

Wow that was chilling, I loved it :D

Although you did change your rhyme scheme, it made those lines stand out, was that intentional? Because if it was it was VERY effective :D

Still think you should get your work published, it kept me on the edge of my seat...that's talent right there :D

I seriously think I'm becoming your poet groupie lolz

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: Master of Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:43:30 AM AEST
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dark, very dark, which makes it all the better to read :D cool poem it was very interesting.to read i liked the rhymes.

SM

Re: Master of Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:38:39 AM AEST
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Wow this is immensely dark and sends shivers down my spine. A very well written and conveyed piece of poetry. Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: Master of Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:51:26 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. The darkness just shines with your words.
Keep up the good work Justin.

Jane~

Re: Master of Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:44:59 AM AEST
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I have to say your poems outdo mine by 100%.I am so proud of you lol.This write is so intense and chilling.I can imagine you even writing a horror novel.I love it.Keep up the good work .

hugs

Love Mom

Re: Master of Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:42:31 AM AEST
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brilliant, dark, chilling and amazingly written :)

you have yourself a fan ;) lol

pix xx

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