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Array ( [sid] => 92036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dirt on The Grave [time] => 2005-04-23 20:26:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Insalved demons, dig the fated hole
Where you will rest, absent of soul
A stagnant body... grown cold

Vengeful angels, watch from above
Corrupting a pureness, once called love
A feeling you felt... numb and null of

Burning hell, of "sinful" flames
Retires your soul, rusted of blame
In the end... only death came

Glowing heaven, of feigned bright lights
Issued your demise, in colors black and white
Life expired... In unrightful blight

Ashes or caskets
dust or maggots
Life fades to black
Without a way to shade back
For when the final note is played
There is only more dirt
To be shoveled
...
On the grave [comments] => 5 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Dirt on The Grave

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:26:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Insalved demons, dig the fated hole
Where you will rest, absent of soul
A stagnant body... grown cold

Vengeful angels, watch from above
Corrupting a pureness, once called love
A feeling you felt... numb and null of

Burning hell, of "sinful" flames
Retires your soul, rusted of blame
In the end... only death came

Glowing heaven, of feigned bright lights
Issued your demise, in colors black and white
Life expired... In unrightful blight

Ashes or caskets
dust or maggots
Life fades to black
Without a way to shade back
For when the final note is played
There is only more dirt
To be shoveled
...
On the grave

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-04-23 20:26:47]
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Re: Dirt on The Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:40:21 PM AEST
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Wow. This is another good poem. There are so many tonight.
This is one of the better ones, though.

I really like the way you have done this. The last line of each stanza is very effective.

The end works very well, too.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Dirt on The Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:46:30 PM AEST
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clark, what were you thinking when you wrote this! you just shamed everyone with them reading this. this poem needs to be torn to shreads....

because i didnt write it.

Re: Dirt on The Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:21:13 PM AEST
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Very Vivid. Almost makes me fear death. Great write.

The Voice

Re: Dirt on The Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:15:07 AM AEST
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Excellent, Clark!!!!! And difficult-to-pull-off rhyme scheme to boot. I enjoyed this a lot and will be re-reading it again before I rumble off to another page.

Impressed... and thinking I need to hit your page more often,
~Snemmy~

Re: Dirt on The Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:46:13 AM AEST
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I liked that, the style and flow was good. I love dark poems, they are my faves. good write
pix xx

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