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The world of beauty
Starts to disappear
As I still breathe
And come near.

I touch a leaf soothingly
Only for the wet paint
To rub off onto me
In heart wrenching pain
Of being flawed unwillingly.

The stream gleaming in the light
Is not as beautiful as the starlit sky
With the suffocating darkening night
Now dripping in the painted lies
That were once pure white.

I see
At least,
The beauty
Of a masterpiece

Ruined flawlessly. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Raped Into Willing

Contributed by essentially9 on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Raped Into Willing

The world of beauty
Starts to disappear
As I still breathe
And come near.

I touch a leaf soothingly
Only for the wet paint
To rub off onto me
In heart wrenching pain
Of being flawed unwillingly.

The stream gleaming in the light
Is not as beautiful as the starlit sky
With the suffocating darkening night
Now dripping in the painted lies
That were once pure white.

I see
At least,
The beauty
Of a masterpiece

Ruined flawlessly.

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-04-23 20:14:30]
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Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:20:04 PM AEST
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Sheesh Jen. Blow me away why don't you?

I adore this. Especially all the stanza's after the first one.. lol. I think they are...louder? They stand out more, and I love the message and image behind them.

And that last line.. I could go on forever...

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:25:42 PM AEST
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well done

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:32:16 PM AEST
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Your poems always touch the heart of me, as

though reaching out in desperation, not only

do i read them, but through your words i feel

you hurt as well, simply beautiful writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:39:09 PM AEST
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Jen....I really need say nothing...you are amzing.

Clark

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:54:57 PM AEST
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Another superb write Jennifer.

Thumbs up!

The Voice

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:56:57 PM AEST
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OH! lol, it's extremely hard for me to describe the kind of knee-jerk reaction I got from reading that last line! lol it was amazing! I actually made a weird *shocked* kind of noise, just because once i read it I couldn't believe you said that. lol, but anyways the kind of descriptions you've given here of the sky, the water, and everything in between was stupendous(lol, just finished watching some looney tunes cartoons) and it was really a treasure in writing. Great stuff here.

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:30:33 AM AEST
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woa i mean woa.
this piece is great .You are truely an amazing poetress.....

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:28:20 AM AEST
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"In heart wrenching pain
Of being flawed unwillingly"

Amazing write.

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:47:33 AM AEST
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wow Jen that was brilliant, I cant say anything that hasn't already been said, I adored this write, cant wait to read more
pix xx

Re: Raped Into Willing (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:03:07 AM AEST
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Great write!

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