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Array ( [sid] => 9203 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Avalanche [time] => 2002-12-25 00:40:00 [hometext] => a poem about new love i guess... [bodytext] => It's evident that things are falling into place
Slowly but surely, spheres are realigning

It's obvious to me that the pieces fit together
So surreal in contrast to anything i'm used to

If i analyze the situation any further,
I'll become detached and impartial to the future

I won't calculate that the numbers add up
I'll busy myself whilst forgetting what i wanted

But i can't sit back and watch that happen,
I can't sit back and see me throw it all away
I have to listen to the voice that beckons me
I feel a desire to follow this path
(Wherever it goes)

So even if it seems insane, take me with you
Pull me out of this avalanche
Even if it seems insane, i'm with you
It seems only you can stop me from burrying Myself underground

Pull me free from the burning wreckage
I refuse to go down with the rest

Cut me free from the twisted metal
Encasing my mind at this moment

Liberate me (but don't let go for a second)
Pull me out of this avalanche
And watch it tumble and crumble

Beneath out feet. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 337 [topic] => 2 [informant] => EndEformEtrancE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Avalanche

Contributed by EndEformEtrancE on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It's evident that things are falling into place
Slowly but surely, spheres are realigning

It's obvious to me that the pieces fit together
So surreal in contrast to anything i'm used to

If i analyze the situation any further,
I'll become detached and impartial to the future

I won't calculate that the numbers add up
I'll busy myself whilst forgetting what i wanted

But i can't sit back and watch that happen,
I can't sit back and see me throw it all away
I have to listen to the voice that beckons me
I feel a desire to follow this path
(Wherever it goes)

So even if it seems insane, take me with you
Pull me out of this avalanche
Even if it seems insane, i'm with you
It seems only you can stop me from burrying Myself underground

Pull me free from the burning wreckage
I refuse to go down with the rest

Cut me free from the twisted metal
Encasing my mind at this moment

Liberate me (but don't let go for a second)
Pull me out of this avalanche
And watch it tumble and crumble

Beneath out feet.

Copyright © EndEformEtrancE ... [ 2002-12-25 00:40:00]
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Re: Avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 03:36:55 AM AEST
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Wow! This is a very beautifull, awesome write.
It really says alot to the reader and I'm sure the one you wrote it for.
Very good!
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy

Re: Avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 09:56:30 PM AEST
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Very nice write and thank you for your kind comment on my recent one... I appreciate it very much...

Re: Avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by EndEformEtrancE on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 10:35:28 PM AEST
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i'm sure i didn't comment on you recent poem, wasn't it the one you wrote over a year ago? oh well, it was lovely whatever it was. Take care!

Re: Avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:01:34 PM AEST
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I hope your new love finds the strength to pull you out from the walls that surround you my friend...this is such a beautiful heartfelt deep write...it's as though it reached out and grabbed me deeply, i think that this is what we need in someone so many times because if they can put that much effort into pulling us out of the avalanche's we live in then what in the world can we not accomplish in life?? And especially together where everything lies beneath one's feet...thank you my friend for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...and look forward to reading more of your poetry...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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