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Array ( [sid] => 92028 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Am [time] => 2005-04-23 19:58:20 [hometext] => Inspired by the artwork of Dave McKean..pictures are inclosed [bodytext] =>












Death creeps closer
With blood-shot eyes
Thorns piercing skin
Yet causing no damage
I am immortal

A young man, giving up
Hangs himself
And yet I, somehow
Find it utterly beautiful
I am optimistic

A tattered statue
Stands tall, wings spread
Slowly falling apart
Yet still retaining meaning
I am captivated [comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Daniels_Princess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
I Am

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:58:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry
















Death creeps closer
With blood-shot eyes
Thorns piercing skin
Yet causing no damage
I am immortal

A young man, giving up
Hangs himself
And yet I, somehow
Find it utterly beautiful
I am optimistic

A tattered statue
Stands tall, wings spread
Slowly falling apart
Yet still retaining meaning
I am captivated




Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-04-23 19:58:20]
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Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:10:11 PM AEST
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:( The pictures aren't working...

I like this, thought the second stanza is a little too disturbing for me. Heh.
But, your words are very desciptive and also kind of beautiful.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:19:38 PM AEST
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Im sorry their not working..heres the link to the site that they are on..the three I enclosed are entitled "hanged man" "death" and "time" all on the right hand column..You'll have to copy and paste the URL into your browser cause Imma little off today and cant think of how to put it in here so ya can just click on it..lol..

http://www.dreamline.nu/theparticletarot


Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:59:46 AM AEST
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I can see the pictures.

Uhhh and the poem, it's good but kind of scary..

Scott


Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:00:45 AM AEST
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This poem is very odd especially the second stanza, but it is still a very good poem.




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