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Array ( [sid] => 92023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm not there [time] => 2005-04-23 17:42:55 [hometext] => i wrote this when i noticed my friend was cutting and she said that i'm never there for her anymore. i'm also reposting this because i thought of a title. [bodytext] => I know I've messed up,
and I'm deeply sorry for it.
I tried my hardest,
and I failed as usual.

You trusted me with your feelings,
your life and all in it.
I let you down,
and I let you go.

I said I'd be there for you,
always and forever.
I got caught in my own life,
and left you there to drown.

You just kept getting sadder,
and I didn't see your pain.
Then you left and
all I could think was
I should have listened to you. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 50 [informant] => linagalMBfan01 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

I'm not there

Contributed by linagalMBfan01 on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I know I've messed up,
and I'm deeply sorry for it.
I tried my hardest,
and I failed as usual.

You trusted me with your feelings,
your life and all in it.
I let you down,
and I let you go.

I said I'd be there for you,
always and forever.
I got caught in my own life,
and left you there to drown.

You just kept getting sadder,
and I didn't see your pain.
Then you left and
all I could think was
I should have listened to you.

Copyright © linagalMBfan01 ... [ 2005-04-23 17:42:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm not there (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:40:23 PM AEST
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wow this was a powerful difficult piece to read and i bet it was to write too. i thought you did a really good job with this piece and that you can feel proud at the way youve expressed yourself here! exceelent work.

-feel free to comment on my work also :)-

Re: I'm not there (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:11:29 PM AEST
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lina win did you write this.
ive dont reconize it sis its good thought
luv ya

Re: I'm not there (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:08:23 PM AEST
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its very good g2g

DEMON

Re: I'm not there (User Rating: 1 )
by Doubtless_One on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:45:14 PM AEST
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perhaps if your friend was cutting it best that you didnt listen to her (loss of blood makes us do crazy things sometimes).
im glad you work things out with you friend

Re: I'm not there (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:10:13 AM AEST
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Very Good!! I liked this.Your writing is improving.Love you, girl.
Gramma

Re: I'm not there (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 01:51:57 AM AEST
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Very nice write.

Re: I'm not there (User Rating: 1 )
by gah_veh on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 10:53:11 PM AEST
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hi nice poem just thought id post really quick

JD

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