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Array ( [sid] => 9200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cell Division and Prosthetic Anger [time] => 2002-12-24 23:40:00 [hometext] => a recent poem, scribbled in a matter of minutes... totally un-edited. [bodytext] => How disgusted must i feel, in times like these,
when everything is slipping down the sinous snaking slide into the double breasted ***** they call oblivion,

How vile and obscene should this seem, the shameless display of 'compassion' - which, later i divulge (as we diverge) as nothing more than first hand fist-***** of the most cruel and brutal kind.

Together we procured a flame that eventually melted us not together, as desired, but apart.
But had it not been lit, we would be close enough still!

Still.

These words commit too harsh a texture, it's hard to say what you feel without getting tangled in the spidery limbs of what you feel you should feel;

Loss.
Longing.
Craving.
Isolation.
Deprivation.
Ruin.
Abandonment.

All of these exist within me but are brought too close to the surface, their focus is too great.

Has she really wronged me?
Or is it that freedom is a gift that only a few can give?
A gift.

it seems now, that i should scrape up the innards that i puked in verses one and two.
the frantic mess that i chose to smear across the page.
I do not feel disgusted.
It does not seem vile or obscene.

I AM NOT HURT!

i am not wounded now, and when i cross my mind back to last week (which seems already like years) i can picture clearly enough the scene:
The burning sensation, the ringing in the ears.

What truly hurts is to think of what i must have done. I must have been a monster. Too intense.

What truly hurts is to think of this, and remember it always:

She wept. First. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 22 [informant] => EndEformEtrancE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Cell Division and Prosthetic Anger

Contributed by EndEformEtrancE on Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



How disgusted must i feel, in times like these,
when everything is slipping down the sinous snaking slide into the double breasted ***** they call oblivion,

How vile and obscene should this seem, the shameless display of 'compassion' - which, later i divulge (as we diverge) as nothing more than first hand fist-***** of the most cruel and brutal kind.

Together we procured a flame that eventually melted us not together, as desired, but apart.
But had it not been lit, we would be close enough still!

Still.

These words commit too harsh a texture, it's hard to say what you feel without getting tangled in the spidery limbs of what you feel you should feel;

Loss.
Longing.
Craving.
Isolation.
Deprivation.
Ruin.
Abandonment.

All of these exist within me but are brought too close to the surface, their focus is too great.

Has she really wronged me?
Or is it that freedom is a gift that only a few can give?
A gift.

it seems now, that i should scrape up the innards that i puked in verses one and two.
the frantic mess that i chose to smear across the page.
I do not feel disgusted.
It does not seem vile or obscene.

I AM NOT HURT!

i am not wounded now, and when i cross my mind back to last week (which seems already like years) i can picture clearly enough the scene:
The burning sensation, the ringing in the ears.

What truly hurts is to think of what i must have done. I must have been a monster. Too intense.

What truly hurts is to think of this, and remember it always:

She wept. First.




Copyright © EndEformEtrancE ... [ 2002-12-24 23:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Cell Division and Prosthetic Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:05:55 PM AEST
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I love non edited poetry, it comes straight from what you were feeling or going through...that's the best poetry one could read....i enjoyed reading this one it's got alot of pain in it, but not to blame yourself my friend you are no monster...i look forward to reading more of your poetry.....thanks for sharing such beautiful poetry.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Cell Division and Prosthetic Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 04:54:59 PM AEST
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yeah, great write, great strong feel to it


Re: Cell Division and Prosthetic Anger (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:21:47 PM AEST
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this is my favourite poem of yours. yeah maybe its the non-editing - its fierce and clean.
i really like your stuff.

Rani


Re: Cell Division and Prosthetic Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by okokjazz on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 07:18:38 AM AEST
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this is so cool! I have to say it isnt my absolute favourite of yours...but ur work is truly inspirational and comes straight out of your heart...or if it doesnt it sounds like it does...keep writing more!
xx


Re: Cell Division and Prosthetic Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by donslovechild on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:46:20 PM AEST
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rather good sir...oh dear

like an 18th century battle with a tiger in the lower slopes of the andes




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