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Array ( [sid] => 91998 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => without you [time] => 2005-04-23 13:24:43 [hometext] => i worte this to the one i love [bodytext] => Without you, there's no change
My nights and days are gray
If I reached out and touched the rain
It just wouldn't feel the same

Without you, I'd be lost
I'd slip down from the top
I'd slide down so low
you'd never, never know...

Without you,
im like a sailor lost at sea
Without you, The world comes down on me

Without you in my life
I'd slowly wilt and die
But with you by my side
You're the reason I'm alive
But without you, without you...

Without you, my hope is small
You let me be me all along
You let the fires rage inside
Knowing someday I'd grow strong Without you,

Without you
im like a sailor lost at sea
without you,
The world comes down on me

I could face a mountain
But I could never climb alone
I could start another day
But how many, I just don't know
You're the reason the sun shines down
And the nights, they don't grow cold
Only you that I'll hold when I'm young
Only you...as we grow old

Without you in my life
I'd slowly wilt and die
But with you by my side
You're the reason I'm alive
But without you, without you...
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without you

Contributed by emobritt on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic



Without you, there's no change
My nights and days are gray
If I reached out and touched the rain
It just wouldn't feel the same

Without you, I'd be lost
I'd slip down from the top
I'd slide down so low
you'd never, never know...

Without you,
im like a sailor lost at sea
Without you, The world comes down on me

Without you in my life
I'd slowly wilt and die
But with you by my side
You're the reason I'm alive
But without you, without you...

Without you, my hope is small
You let me be me all along
You let the fires rage inside
Knowing someday I'd grow strong Without you,

Without you
im like a sailor lost at sea
without you,
The world comes down on me

I could face a mountain
But I could never climb alone
I could start another day
But how many, I just don't know
You're the reason the sun shines down
And the nights, they don't grow cold
Only you that I'll hold when I'm young
Only you...as we grow old

Without you in my life
I'd slowly wilt and die
But with you by my side
You're the reason I'm alive
But without you, without you...




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Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:26:58 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful....very touching...


Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_hearted_loser on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:02:00 PM AEST
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It sounds like you have lost somebody that you really lvoed. Great poem ! Keep writing !


Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:25:32 PM AEST
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Lovely words, I hope you never lose them and they never lose you.
I adore the first stanza with the image of touching the rain.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:02:51 AM AEST
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I loved this.....touching..great write..
Theresa


Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:27:17 PM AEST
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well written; i know how you feel keep up the writing..




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