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[title] => Would You Cry A Thousand Tears If I Fell And Hit Bottom
[time] => 2005-04-23 10:26:12
[hometext] => My best friend wrote this . Lots of love Kendra!
[bodytext] => My tears have yet gone, my eyes are red, my heart feels soar. The pain is a shadow washing over me. Hatred has no remorse, laughter has no happy ending, and a smile can show fear. One tear from my eye is all i can shed for I have wasted my time with you. Bring me down with you, make me hurt, watch me cry. But in the end I will rise from this hell and live a life without you. Do you even know me? Do you care to ask? Is your soul hidden my the darkness of the night? With blood shot eyes i look right through you and I see nothing. I long to say this to your face, but I can't fight the pain, I can't fight the blood. I need a friend to help make me stronger so I can say these three simple words, but what is there to live for, should I fight for my freedom, should I laugh and dare show a smile? Yes. Good-bye forever. I have loved and felt loved, but there is no love to feel anymore. You are the one that has hit bottom and I will not stand here in tears and in remorse and wait for you to climb to the top and then fall again. I'm letting go now and I'm letting go forever. So I'll say it one more time. Good-bye forever.
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Would You Cry A Thousand Tears If I Fell And Hit Bottom
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broken_hearted_loser
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:26:12 AM in AEST
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My tears have yet gone, my eyes are red, my heart feels soar. The pain is a shadow washing over me. Hatred has no remorse, laughter has no happy ending, and a smile can show fear. One tear from my eye is all i can shed for I have wasted my time with you. Bring me down with you, make me hurt, watch me cry. But in the end I will rise from this hell and live a life without you. Do you even know me? Do you care to ask? Is your soul hidden my the darkness of the night? With blood shot eyes i look right through you and I see nothing. I long to say this to your face, but I can't fight the pain, I can't fight the blood. I need a friend to help make me stronger so I can say these three simple words, but what is there to live for, should I fight for my freedom, should I laugh and dare show a smile? Yes. Good-bye forever. I have loved and felt loved, but there is no love to feel anymore. You are the one that has hit bottom and I will not stand here in tears and in remorse and wait for you to climb to the top and then fall again. I'm letting go now and I'm letting go forever. So I'll say it one more time. Good-bye forever.
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Re: Would You Cry A Thousand Tears If I Fell And Hit Bottom
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by heartless_soul on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:17:44 PM AEST
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this was interestingly emotional, and touching. this seems to have alot of talent behind it, your friend should join as well, thanks for posting this I dont know exactly what elas to say about this.
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Re: Would You Cry A Thousand Tears If I Fell And Hit Bottom
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by m_p_w777 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 02:16:56 AM AEST
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| well thank your friend for me because ive felt the same exact way |
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Re: Would You Cry A Thousand Tears If I Fell And Hit Bottom
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by kcampbell on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:16:32 PM AEST
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wow, that's rough but I can see where they got it from...
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