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Array ( [sid] => 91965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without A care... [time] => 2005-04-23 06:12:52 [hometext] => Thinking of committing suicide....? [bodytext] => Take those feelings away
hurt
pain
sickness
It makes we weak and makes me say
terrible
horrible things
that I don't mean okay?
But I release them with
no effort at all
caring not at all
I feel bad
but don't care
I feel sad
without a care
I ignore
I don't want a life to explore
I want to curl in a ball
forget that I am here
without your stare...
Silence is terrifying
I can't scream
I feel mean!
Why do I exist....
my life I want to resist
Make me blank
I don't want to be here
or anywhere....
just leave me alone....
killing myself is the only...
only way I want to make myself...
-happiest?!

I don't want to know God...He is my worst thought...
take Him away...I don't need Him...
at all
EVER!!!!
u n d e r s t a n d !


Guess what ...

...I....DO...!

One day I will realise this...
in my own time...
in my own way,
just keep that in the
-back of MY mind!

~~ [comments] => 6 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 36 [informant] => inoc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Without A care...

Contributed by inoc on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:12:52 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Take those feelings away
hurt
pain
sickness
It makes we weak and makes me say
terrible
horrible things
that I don't mean okay?
But I release them with
no effort at all
caring not at all
I feel bad
but don't care
I feel sad
without a care
I ignore
I don't want a life to explore
I want to curl in a ball
forget that I am here
without your stare...
Silence is terrifying
I can't scream
I feel mean!
Why do I exist....
my life I want to resist
Make me blank
I don't want to be here
or anywhere....
just leave me alone....
killing myself is the only...
only way I want to make myself...
-happiest?!

I don't want to know God...He is my worst thought...
take Him away...I don't need Him...
at all
EVER!!!!
u n d e r s t a n d !


Guess what ...

...I....DO...!

One day I will realise this...
in my own time...
in my own way,
just keep that in the
-back of MY mind!

~~




Copyright © inoc ... [ 2005-04-23 06:12:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Without A care... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nos_Bunny on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:10:47 AM AEST
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wow dude... or dudette (isnt concentrating on names just now) .... um I THINK I know what you mean, you should check my info and read the poem called 'Rent A Life' I don't wanna spam your feelings, so I wont post a link, but that.....is exactly how I feel about life.... hold on....hold on


Re: Without A care... (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:49:36 AM AEST
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commiting suicide,what a waste of a life
i realise that now,we are all here for something,the world doesnt ask much of us,just to live,and a selfish act,of peircing your skin,just to let all the pain go,isnt going to help,i use to feel like that,sometimes i still do,but just remember to hang in there,if God isnt there for you and you dont want him/her to be,then someone is always holding your hand,family friends,they are the light and living God you need when you feel down....
love han xxx


Re: Without A care... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:00:49 PM AEST
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I hope this is just your muse talking and you aren't really thinking about it. deep write, very pained and sad
pix xx


Re: Without A care... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:37:14 PM AEST
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I would miss u and your beautiful writting . . .

((((((inoc)))))


Dorian Chambers


Re: Without A care... (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:02:28 AM AEST
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...just thought I'd mention...
this poem is not directed from me [though yes it does sound like it...sorry!]...but I wrote this in the eyes of someone that is feeling that way....as I have noticed -many- people young and old and in between, do feel like this at times...sorry for the confusion....cheers to all!~


Re: Without A care... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:19:07 AM AEST
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that was a very different approach at writing! i like it!! And it's almost like you've written my exact thoughts out too.
Be strong. Don't let it win and get the better of u! Fight! :)
great poem though! :)




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