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Would you even notice I was gone?
It feels like you don't care about me
you seen to be pushing me away
Why don't you call me anymore?
Have you found someone new?
Someone better?
I don't think you love me anymore.
What'd I do to make you hate me?
Am I not pretty enough?
Smart enough?
Talented enough?
Just tell me the truth
while you still have the chance.
My life will be over soon
I'm ready to slash my throat
You don't love me anymore,
so why should I live?
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You don't love me anymore

Contributed by SelfDistruction on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:06:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If I died right now would you miss me?
Would you even notice I was gone?
It feels like you don't care about me
you seen to be pushing me away
Why don't you call me anymore?
Have you found someone new?
Someone better?
I don't think you love me anymore.
What'd I do to make you hate me?
Am I not pretty enough?
Smart enough?
Talented enough?
Just tell me the truth
while you still have the chance.
My life will be over soon
I'm ready to slash my throat
You don't love me anymore,
so why should I live?

Copyright Â© SelfDistruction ... [ 2005-04-22 21:06:40]
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Re: You don't love me anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by girltranscended on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:41:43 PM AEST
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Live to find the one who sees your beauty, brains, and talent - who reveres it, studies it, and nurtures it. And P.S. - much easier to have someone see it in you if you see it in yourself.

:)

Re: You don't love me anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:18:05 PM AEST
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very emotional poem
it'll take some time to move on, but you'll be so much stronger once you do

Re: You don't love me anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:18:16 PM AEST
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Okay, thats not fair this one made me cry too. People have too much talent these days. Please smile? I don't like reading sad poetry, for this reason, but what bites is the fact that the tear-jerkers are the best ones. Hang in there, you will find the right guy for you, and half the time it isn't even the guy that you have had your eye on. WHat I have learned is the fact that whatever guy you are longing for right now, maybe there is a better one out there. Keep your hopes up. Hope is the key to everything. :-) Huggs.

Re: You don't love me anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:01:26 PM AEST
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This such a well written and powerful write and I’m glad you were able to share it. This is how I’m feeling in my life right now and yes it is hard. It also hurts me to feel this much loss and hate. Take care and if you need to talk just IM me….Steve

Re: You don't love me anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:25:11 PM AEST
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People do the damndest things. It's very hard to find a love who will not disappoint you like this, because people live for selfish reasons. To live unselfishly, though, is a tremendously freeing thing, and by doing so I think we can find others who will not be so disappointing. We learn wisdom when we seek it, and then we can understand others better.

Sorry for the ramble. Blessings to you.

Andrew

Re: You don't love me anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 03:09:30 AM AEST
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Someone is out there. Believe that!!!!

Joanna

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