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Array ( [sid] => 91898 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My All [time] => 2005-04-22 15:57:32 [hometext] => This is just a poem I wrote about someone that I feel is special to me [bodytext] => Speechless is what u make me,
Everytime u speak to me,
Chills begin to run up my spine,
As you touch me with,
Your love,
It's like everytime I look at u,
I know that u love me,
But I feel like as though your scared,
To open up your heart to me,
Deep down inside of me,
I love you so much,
That I lose control,
Because your love is like,
The remedy that keeps me alive,
I can't lie to myself,
You are the light that,
Helps me to see,
The one that motavates me,
To stay strong,
I know that we are friends,
And it takes time to,
Know how a person feels,
On the inside of their heart,
But I'm ready to give u,
My all [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My All

Contributed by Luckycharm on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 03:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Speechless is what u make me,
Everytime u speak to me,
Chills begin to run up my spine,
As you touch me with,
Your love,
It's like everytime I look at u,
I know that u love me,
But I feel like as though your scared,
To open up your heart to me,
Deep down inside of me,
I love you so much,
That I lose control,
Because your love is like,
The remedy that keeps me alive,
I can't lie to myself,
You are the light that,
Helps me to see,
The one that motavates me,
To stay strong,
I know that we are friends,
And it takes time to,
Know how a person feels,
On the inside of their heart,
But I'm ready to give u,
My all

Copyright © Luckycharm ... [ 2005-04-22 15:57:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My All (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 04:27:25 PM AEST
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This is really sweet and something I think alot of people can relate to..

"Because your love is like,
The remedy that keeps me alive"

I love that part..because it explains so much, such a strong feeling in such a little amount of words..I love this..

Re: My All (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:40:31 PM AEST
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Nicely written, but I can sense the sadness behind the lines. Open up and let this person know how u really feel about them. Only then can u put ur heart and mind at ease.
Well done.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: My All (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:34:35 PM AEST
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very well written. im kinda in the same situation. you never know what could happen.
i liked it.
-Courtney

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