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I once loved her but now I hate her
I once was sad to think of her dying but now I really dont give a sh**
because Shes a bit**

I cant believe I actually listened to her bull****
I cant believe I tried to commit suicide over her ass
Shes a bit**

I dont know what I though about her that was so special
Shes a bit**

She will deceive you
She will make you feel loved
Until shes finished with you
Shes a bit**

She despises love
She hates the sound of it
Because shes a cold hearted bit**
What else would you expect

She seemed so perfect
Until her flaws started showing through
She seemed so loving
Until I found out the truth
Shes a bit**

The ones who seem so perfect
Are the ones that you really need to stay away from

Shes a bit**
Even thou shes a bit**
Shes my bit**
and thats the end of it.
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Shes A Bit**

Contributed by apcfan on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 02:41:25 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Shes a bit**
I once loved her but now I hate her
I once was sad to think of her dying but now I really dont give a sh**
because Shes a bit**

I cant believe I actually listened to her bull****
I cant believe I tried to commit suicide over her ass
Shes a bit**

I dont know what I though about her that was so special
Shes a bit**

She will deceive you
She will make you feel loved
Until shes finished with you
Shes a bit**

She despises love
She hates the sound of it
Because shes a cold hearted bit**
What else would you expect

She seemed so perfect
Until her flaws started showing through
She seemed so loving
Until I found out the truth
Shes a bit**

The ones who seem so perfect
Are the ones that you really need to stay away from

Shes a bit**
Even thou shes a bit**
Shes my bit**
and thats the end of it.

Copyright © apcfan ... [ 2005-04-22 14:41:25]
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Re: Shes A Bit** (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 04:37:51 PM AEST
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my favorite saying if its to good to be true it is sorry that you had to learn the hard way though. Your anger is powerful but when one hurts you like that you are entitled.Great rant
Michelle

Re: Shes A Bit** (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:34:45 PM AEST
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you'll meet quite a few of those in your life, but move on and don't waste your feelings on hating her, especially when you have someone else who loves you

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