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[sid] => 91872
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Let Me Go
[time] => 2005-04-22 11:28:29
[hometext] => PLease comment on my poetry I am just really letting otheres see all my poetry and would like feedback
[bodytext] => Yesterday you asked a dreadful question, "tell me how to let you go?" you asked, The answer for this I will never know. This answer you will have to seek. How you do this will be at your own discretion, after you do you wil be a new man unmasked, I cannot give the answer cause I have not let you go, you make me feel so weak. Iknow what needs to be done, but it is so hard to do you were my first love, the father to my girls but the fighting will not stop What has been said and done cannot be undone, So there will never be another me and you, This I have coem to accept , But I will never let go, of the love we have shared [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 22 [informant] => rikkijade [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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