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Contributed by
tin
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 11:45:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was an empty glass,
Untill you filled me up
A shallow river,
Untill you closed the dam
Stuck in a room,
Untill you opened the door
Slave to the world,
Untill you broke my chains
When i lack in life,
You compensate with love.
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tin
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2005-04-21 23:45:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Full
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 11:47:15 PM AEST (User
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AWW! This is perfect. Short, simple, and oh so sweet. It's beautiful. Wonderful work! 5 stars from me. :-) |
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Re: Full
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:05:50 PM AEST (User
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This is the best of the best...Written well..
God Bless! |
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