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Array ( [sid] => 91782 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Relisation of a lost soul [time] => 2005-04-21 19:49:08 [hometext] => i swear im bi polar, i can be so happy im on top of the world one day, then it will all crash down to the deepest of low's [bodytext] => sitting
dreaming
silently screaming

eye's break
tears fall

i cant stop my walls
from falling
hurting

all my fears
mixed with many tears
the insanity of it all
i think i understand now
im just sitting here
awaiting the fatality

i have been waiting to scream
loud and strong
for far to long
its haunting me now
from the depths of my eternal soul

.....i am so weak!!
how did i last so long?

the foundations of my mind
holding up my life
my only sanctuary
but its built on shifting sands
and the crap never stoped raining

its beating down
on this last outpost of sanity
and the sands are shifting

it just keeps falling
been this way for 17 ******* years
and i gave up hope it would stop

sitting
waiting
wishing
.......its still raining on me
falling so soft
i swear it hurts so gently
and it just wont stop [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 32 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Relisation of a lost soul

Contributed by socialmisfit on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:49:08 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

sitting
dreaming
silently screaming

eye's break
tears fall

i cant stop my walls
from falling
hurting

all my fears
mixed with many tears
the insanity of it all
i think i understand now
im just sitting here
awaiting the fatality

i have been waiting to scream
loud and strong
for far to long
its haunting me now
from the depths of my eternal soul

.....i am so weak!!
how did i last so long?

the foundations of my mind
holding up my life
my only sanctuary
but its built on shifting sands
and the crap never stoped raining

its beating down
on this last outpost of sanity
and the sands are shifting

it just keeps falling
been this way for 17 ******* years
and i gave up hope it would stop

sitting
waiting
wishing
.......its still raining on me
falling so soft
i swear it hurts so gently
and it just wont stop

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-04-21 19:49:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Relisation of a lost soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:56:59 PM AEST
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Deffinitly a pwerful write, sad but powerful. The line
"I swear it hurts so gentally"
sums it up very well. Nice job.

Re: Relisation of a lost soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:11:57 AM AEST
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awesome write, well done

Re: Relisation of a lost soul (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 05:29:33 PM AEST
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Really nice works...I like it. Scorp.

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