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Array ( [sid] => 91729 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => is it over [time] => 2005-04-21 10:17:20 [hometext] => what am i to you [bodytext] => broken hearted i lay here
crying tears out of fear
that you wont love me
i just cant understand or try to see
how you,could just ***** me off
is it over?
or am i still in your heart
just tell me please
i know i've did you wrong
we both have
we arent virgins to each other
please tell me
im broken i need to understand
is it over?
for me and you
tell me boy
am i just a toy
to pick up and play with
when you bored
am i just yours
because you can have me?
just tell me the truth
i love you
more than life
do you love me
even a little
im waiting on your words
just tell me
honestly tell me
is it over?
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is it over

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:17:20 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

broken hearted i lay here
crying tears out of fear
that you wont love me
i just cant understand or try to see
how you,could just ***** me off
is it over?
or am i still in your heart
just tell me please
i know i've did you wrong
we both have
we arent virgins to each other
please tell me
im broken i need to understand
is it over?
for me and you
tell me boy
am i just a toy
to pick up and play with
when you bored
am i just yours
because you can have me?
just tell me the truth
i love you
more than life
do you love me
even a little
im waiting on your words
just tell me
honestly tell me
is it over?

Copyright Â© Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2005-04-21 10:17:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: is it over (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:32:07 PM AEST
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This was a painful write to think that you would just let someone have you for their fun and not for love. But it was well written and I hope this is not how love has treated you. Love is hard and can play some games with your heart and mind but there is always a new love out their if your treated this way. Take care and keep up the good writes….Steve

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