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all i need to do to see you is close my eyes,
memory of your face gives me butterflies,
with your laughter, charm and flare
thank you for always being there,
where love ever flows like a clear stream
during the nights you live in my dreams,
and all is safe and you are really here
i wish if i open them you will appear,
of the whole world; this my favorite place
lying in bed in each other's embrace,
oh, let me be as a bat, in love, blind
for thus in dreams you'll live in my mind,
for those times when dreams we must let go
when the day moves in and the stars seem far,
as the day passes, there you are in my heart
for this is one place you will never part,
when i smell a new rose its your smile i feel
you are the one who made my life real,
as the wind blows upon my skin
for it is my soul you live in.
§* *§
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my soul you live in
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:48:14 AM in AEST
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all i need to do to see you is close my eyes,
memory of your face gives me butterflies,
with your laughter, charm and flare
thank you for always being there,
where love ever flows like a clear stream
during the nights you live in my dreams,
and all is safe and you are really here
i wish if i open them you will appear,
of the whole world; this my favorite place
lying in bed in each other's embrace,
oh, let me be as a bat, in love, blind
for thus in dreams you'll live in my mind,
for those times when dreams we must let go
when the day moves in and the stars seem far,
as the day passes, there you are in my heart
for this is one place you will never part,
when i smell a new rose its your smile i feel
you are the one who made my life real,
as the wind blows upon my skin
for it is my soul you live in.
§* *§
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:55:27 AM AEST
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That was just beautiful...
Perfection in a bottle, nothing more to say that was just really really really great.
Jane~ |
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by emystar on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:58:12 AM AEST
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Awesome write, Nessa.
Beautifull love that shines in this masterpeice.
Good to catch ya posting a gain.
luv, huggs, take care,
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| I thought i would read a few poems this morning. I didn't Know that I was going to cry and be in awee of your work. The music made it reach the top of the list of fine poetry. Thanks. |
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by venkat on
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What a beautiful title..."my soul you live in".
marvellous poetry with tender emotions so beautifully touching the heart and soul:
"when i smell a new rose its your smile i feel
you are the one who made my life real, as the wind blows upon my skin for it is my soul you live in"...its great..great Nessa..hugs n love
sincerely:-) venkat
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by inoc on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 06:15:17 AM AEST
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You ARE a true poet in the making....As
-always- a great poem.. never have I read a bad one of yours...simply beautiful.
cheers!~ |
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 06:29:46 AM AEST
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Oh my this brought tears to my eyes. It was so very beautiful and the music also.
Excellent
Love Angelxxxx |
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:56:08 AM AEST
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Nessa you absolutely blew me away with this sheer masterpiece. An amazing poetess u really are. A superb write.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:03:28 AM AEST
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stunning.
johnny. |
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:23:04 AM AEST
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wow awsome.
hugs |
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:47:10 PM AEST
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oh my princess of poetry has returned and took my breath away once again with her lovely words
(Nessa))
love you
Michelle |
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:52:14 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful.
Scott |
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by pixie on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:53:20 PM AEST
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wow Nessa *huggies* gosh I hve missed you so much that was so deep and beautiful and so moving, I loved it!!!!!
take care
Pix xx |
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:03:03 AM AEST
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How very romantic, How very lovely, How very loving indeed!
It's true love you need
dear LadyFawn..........I'm still praying........
Warm love,
Lovingcritters
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:17:01 AM AEST
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wow nessa...awsome romantic piece.
Just what I would picture love to be all about...wonderful!!! |
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:56:21 PM AEST
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Oh, fawny.
Stop writing love poems to me.
--Ghosty |
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:47:00 PM AEST
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| That's such a beautiful poem! I felt that way, so happy, when I was with Jesse, but no more, he doesn't trust me anymore. I'm now depressed :'( I still see him in my dreams at night, however. I wish he could come back to me. So that he can forgive me. I hope you're happy with that person. Jenny |
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:57:34 AM AEST
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Nessa ... there are few who do love poetry as well as you. This is beautiful.
Nazzy ~ |
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by Former_Member on
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Less is more...
There is a simplicity within this piece which compliments love, itself, so well.
A time-stopping, heart fluttering write.
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by Archie on
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| Great poem. I have not read your poems very often as of late. I think I have been missing out. This is very inspiring. |
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by Former_Member on
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Ohhh hun this is so gorgeous! I'm sure he's looking down on you at this minute now with a beautiful smile directed just at you. This is so beautifully written my darling dear, the words fall out of my mouth so easily... Beautiful write from the beautiful soul that is you.
Take care always
Love you
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:27:40 PM AEST
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The beauty of these romantic words and flow, along with the beauty of the music are spellbinding. I find I drift to a fairyland type of place....so dreamy and emotionally soothing.
A masterpiece
Will |
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by loveisendless on
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NO WONDER SO MANY HAVE READ THIS,IT'S POETRY IN MOTION,WITH A SWEET KISS,& SOMETHING ONLY LOVE CAN BE HOSTING! PLEASE KEEP TEACHING US HOW TO WRITE,SO WE TOO CAN FINALLY PROVE,THAT LOVE IS A LIGHT, & SHINES SO BRIGHT ON THE HEARTS IT DOES MOVE!! YOU'RE GREAT -
LADYFAWN!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!
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by kaosar on
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| Actually I can't find the words to express how this wonderful poem let me feel. the words , the music , the feelings .. they all made me live the story . it's marvellous! |
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by Aquaelius on
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Let me tell you... that was extremely nice. I feel pacified by reading it, very good... you have once again impressed me as you have done many times before... But, this does give pause to one question:
How's the rent like in your soul? Are the morgage rates high... I think I would like to live there too.
I enjoyed it.
Aq. |
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by Jenni_K on
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Oh Ness.....Better late than never....You are truly an inspiration to all the poets on YPDC... Never once has a poem of yours disappointed me.... Don't ever give up writing..
Great to see you posting again.
Love and woofies..
Jenni |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:59:13 PM AEST
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Awww Nessa sorry I'm so late in commenting on this, but I've been so busy lately...
This is so beautiful, very powerful, sweet, deep and moving....stirred me to tears (ha. and i'm on my school lunch break right now :p)
Totally awestruck...
~kt |
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:23:50 AM AEST
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| I have no words for this truely romantic piece of love poetry at its best. Excellent love from bernard. |
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by fielding88 on
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| This was a really impressive piece of writing. I always love it when people pay such close attention to a rhyme scheme in their works, it's something I have yet to properly harness myself. It was so refreshing to see it in your piece. The subject matter was something I love reading about, and the words you've chosen to express yourself were picked with a certain level of skill that made everything click. A beautiful piece. |
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by freckle on
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What a wonderful poem. Very beautiful words and flow. I liked the music too...peaceful and lovely.
Carol |
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by Former_Member on
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| beautiful poem written from the heart,,I thought this was fantastic... |
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by Vampirequeen on
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| wow awsome. |
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by Crimson_Valley on
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| Nessa... That is the most perfect poem I have EVER read!! That is just so good, one day I want to write like you. By the way... Where'd you get the song? Title? Artist? I wanna get that song. It's too good to be possible. |
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by Former_Member on
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| I had to find room to leave a comment! Good thing I found it because I don't know how I missed this one! Your words speak of the true love of a soul mate that no other love can ever compare to. Nessa, this is a beautiful piece for the man in your soul. He will Always live there. God bless! Joni |
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| Lovely thoughts. I like the first two lines of the third stanza the best. Your poem is so full of the naturalness of a love relationship. Excellent work! |
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I'm new so I've only read a couple of your poems... but of the ones I have read their utterly amazing, so beautiful, and tender I wish I could write like that
-taylor |
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| Wow---way to go! This is really well written, so descriptive and full of life and loss. Well done. Scorp. |
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Oh Nessa this is lovely, and true......we've been so blessed just to have one, some never do! The memories alone can keep us going, and the last line is so endearing...my soul you live in. They were our soul mates, jusr because they are gone doesn't keep our soul from not longing and hanging on.
And thank you my dear friend for all your lovely comments on my poems also...you are too generous and kind Nessa dear
Warm Love
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by Former_Member on
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| WOW! So beautifully written. It's such a sincere and heartfelt write. Brilliant! |
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by persia on
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Simply beautiful!
persia |
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
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Gave me a really warm feeling inside.
Wonderful inspiring write
Steve |
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| Wonderful piece of love writing one of the best I have seen on this list.top marks from bernard. |
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Oh nessa... this made me cry.
The love in this is just so...true, and beautiful, and right.
I literally fell into your words.
And absolutely gorgeous write my friend,
*hugs tons* Phil xxx |
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by thumper on
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You truely have a beautiful soul, and it shines through in your poetry. This is just.......exquisite! Peace to you.
Thumper ; o) |
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:22:46 AM AEST
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| wow indeed |
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by Merry on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 10:03:12 AM AEST
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Nessa
Your love was truly special and blessed - it makes me cry to think how you have suffered - but I know you have such special memories to comfort you until you are reunited.
Love always sis
merry |
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Simply beautiful Nessa:
Has to be beautiful when a beautiful soul speaks like this.
I got butterflies reading it. But not the hollow feeling, or queasiness type. Oh yes, it was emotional and lots of tender tension hit me, which is the type of anxious anticipation one has when they miss their true love in heaven. Oh this write sent me tears of joy, because it allowed me to feel my first husbands soul.
I love how you said ...
*****for it is my soul you live in.
because I have kept my first husband encirling my heart for many years. Some may think it strange, but when you truly love a person, and God takes them from you, you just have to have something to hold onto. Its hard to let go of their soul, believe me I know.
Your write was the affected expression of happy grief if there is any such thing.
Raquel Leah
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by Stellar on
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"when i smell a new rose its your smile i feel
you are the one who made my life real,
as the wind blows upon my skin
for it is my soul you live in."
Ahh, that gave me chills. This is so beautiful!
God Bless,
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Oh Nessa, - how I identify with your beautiful words. On September 30th is the anniversary of my beloved husbands death, September the great month of Severance. Severance of all I had in this ea rthly life.
And yet, he lives in my soul inspires me, although I must admit Anniversaries cause pain, I wish there were no anniversaries- they are only in time, not in the soul's true home.,
as the day passes, there you are in my heart
for this is one place you will never part,"
Oh how true!.
Thank you for reminding us that Anniversaries do not mean much vs. the Eternal Presence.
Love and Hugs
Elizabeth
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This is beautiful. It is amazing how you captured love upon a piece of paper in your words. Once again this was truly beautiful.
Rich |
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a quite beautiful poem. great job.
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| your poetry really reaches the heart |
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