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Array ( [sid] => 91686 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Don't Understand Me [time] => 2005-04-20 23:28:45 [hometext] => I wrote this when I was upset with my stepdad... it's about him [bodytext] => A black cloud hangs above me
Every day and all night
I feel locked up, yearning to be set free
Your actions and words just aren’t right
You use your put-downs constantly
On me, It makes me feel worthless
That I can’t do anything right for you to see
You lower my self-esteem, but I can’t be careless
I know that you just don’t understand me
Although you want to think you do
You play the part of a dad horribly
You yell constantly, as you try and make me do
Anything that you want me to blissfully
But you brain wash me, and you’re killing my soul
I can’t tolerate all the pain that you painfully
Stab right through the heart of my soul [comments] => 1 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 6 [informant] => smiley_jennyxoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You Don't Understand Me

Contributed by smiley_jennyxoxo on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:28:45 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

A black cloud hangs above me
Every day and all night
I feel locked up, yearning to be set free
Your actions and words just aren’t right
You use your put-downs constantly
On me, It makes me feel worthless
That I can’t do anything right for you to see
You lower my self-esteem, but I can’t be careless
I know that you just don’t understand me
Although you want to think you do
You play the part of a dad horribly
You yell constantly, as you try and make me do
Anything that you want me to blissfully
But you brain wash me, and you’re killing my soul
I can’t tolerate all the pain that you painfully
Stab right through the heart of my soul

Copyright Â© smiley_jennyxoxo ... [ 2005-04-20 23:28:45]
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Re: You Don't Understand Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:53:32 AM AEST
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so sad. No one has the right to treat u this way. Still I do know there are some insecure, sad people on this Planet with us.
U r a great person as u see what the problem is. Don't let this person take u down with them. You'll be grown someday so jus let the abuse slide off your back like water oon a duck.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
emy
Any one as understanding and talented as u don't need to feel inferior to any one.

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