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Array ( [sid] => 91644 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Split in two [time] => 2005-04-20 19:24:35 [hometext] => slit in two emotion. life really sucks at times.. but i know that it always gets better [bodytext] => Two Directions
Equally strong,
Confused emotions
Which one is wrong

Loving them both
Tears of the abyss,
My soul is split in two
Where is that beautiful bliss.

A clouded mind
A pounding heart
An earth shattering end
With a brand new start

Love is so hard
Both are so real
It all seems like a dream
My heart needs to heal

One day I’ll know
Which one to pick
To be with forever
I hope this one will stick
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Split in two

Contributed by GurlyTye on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:24:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Two Directions
Equally strong,
Confused emotions
Which one is wrong

Loving them both
Tears of the abyss,
My soul is split in two
Where is that beautiful bliss.

A clouded mind
A pounding heart
An earth shattering end
With a brand new start

Love is so hard
Both are so real
It all seems like a dream
My heart needs to heal

One day I’ll know
Which one to pick
To be with forever
I hope this one will stick

Copyright Â© GurlyTye ... [ 2005-04-20 19:24:35]
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Re: Split in two (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:57:24 PM AEST
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THAT WAS PIMPIN

Re: Split in two (User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:46:43 PM AEST
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That's a great poem. I feel that way often times, I have mixed emotions, especially lately. Thanks for posting. Jenny

Re: Split in two (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:43:48 AM AEST
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You no I’m going to say that poem was great Tye I reallly feel your emotion in your work. It has so much truth and this one part really spoke to me.

Love is so hard
Both are so real
It all seems like a dream
My heart needs to heal

This is the story of my life right now girl. Thank you for another great write to read. Take care and I’m glad you wrote this and I hope you will keep writing more….Steve

Re: Split in two (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:16:31 AM AEST
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It is never easy Dear. Some times it seems like the decision just gets made for you as if you have no control over it . Just be patient ... you will find your way.

Nazzy ~
( PS ... you did good depicting the battle )

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