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Array ( [sid] => 91618 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Gone Bad [time] => 2005-04-20 16:03:13 [hometext] => What is there to say...I thought I was gonna lose him. But all it took was a little more waiting after this. Now we are the definition of forever. [bodytext] => You never really liked me,
Just forget it, don’t even try.
I finally know the truth,
So now you don’t even have to lie.

Why don’t you just be honest with me,
So I can quit loving a jerk.
You shouldn’t have even asked me,
If you knew that it wouldn’t work.

I told you that I loved you.
What kind of an answer is “Alright.”
“I love you too.” Would have been nice,
I could have slept that night.

But you don’t know what love is.
You’ve proven that two times.
I know what I have to do,
And I know I’ll think of you sometimes.

At least all my “I love you’s”
Don’t even sound the same.
Maybe that will make it easier,
When I pretend I don’t know your name.

I’ve gotta let go for good this time,
And not let myself go back.
Memories, talks, and even love,
I gotta let go of all that.

Even though I’m letting you go,
I’d still die for you in rhyme.
Cuz I know I’m going to heaven,
But you’re a sinner; You need more time.

And if I get to heaven,
In the future before you do.
Then I will be your angel,
I’ll protect, and walk with you.

I really hope I changed your life,
But some hopes don’t come true.
The next time I think of love gone bad,
I know I’ll think of you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jacobskk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Love Gone Bad

Contributed by jacobskk on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 04:03:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You never really liked me,
Just forget it, don’t even try.
I finally know the truth,
So now you don’t even have to lie.

Why don’t you just be honest with me,
So I can quit loving a jerk.
You shouldn’t have even asked me,
If you knew that it wouldn’t work.

I told you that I loved you.
What kind of an answer is “Alright.”
“I love you too.” Would have been nice,
I could have slept that night.

But you don’t know what love is.
You’ve proven that two times.
I know what I have to do,
And I know I’ll think of you sometimes.

At least all my “I love you’s”
Don’t even sound the same.
Maybe that will make it easier,
When I pretend I don’t know your name.

I’ve gotta let go for good this time,
And not let myself go back.
Memories, talks, and even love,
I gotta let go of all that.

Even though I’m letting you go,
I’d still die for you in rhyme.
Cuz I know I’m going to heaven,
But you’re a sinner; You need more time.

And if I get to heaven,
In the future before you do.
Then I will be your angel,
I’ll protect, and walk with you.

I really hope I changed your life,
But some hopes don’t come true.
The next time I think of love gone bad,
I know I’ll think of you.




Copyright © jacobskk ... [ 2005-04-20 16:03:13]
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Re: Love Gone Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 05:16:15 PM AEST
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wow this is really good. I've read quite a few of your poems and I really like your writting style. 5 stars from me :-D

~Brenna~


Re: Love Gone Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 09:23:07 PM AEST
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The continuity is verry efective with the words

u speak, very nice staement u make . . .


Dorian Chambers




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