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So quiet and so silent without any understanding
You can just stop falling for the lies
Death isn't until your old enough to know the meaning of crazed
So watch me in that daze as everyhing you know
Falls apart and cames back together
Its just another place you want to be away
From all the apathetic mindless lover we call friends
Nothings hopeless enless you want it to be
I can't say these words enough
Just to make you accept what we're not
I'll just get further with every passing monent
So don't hold me to tight because your choking me. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 468 [topic] => 48 [informant] => xbleedingheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Razpr

Contributed by xbleedingheart on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 06:23:31 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This is everything you thought yesterday would be
So quiet and so silent without any understanding
You can just stop falling for the lies
Death isn't until your old enough to know the meaning of crazed
So watch me in that daze as everyhing you know
Falls apart and cames back together
Its just another place you want to be away
From all the apathetic mindless lover we call friends
Nothings hopeless enless you want it to be
I can't say these words enough
Just to make you accept what we're not
I'll just get further with every passing monent
So don't hold me to tight because your choking me.

Copyright © xbleedingheart ... [ 2005-04-20 06:23:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Razpr (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 02:32:48 AM AEST
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i would repeat the same praises mindlessly like those that comment congratulations to anyone who scribbles a cheap immitation of talent, it would be pathetic. your work is brilliance in the mirror amplified beauty. cherish your gift and it will curse you, the measurement and value here is what you have to lose by the enslavement of truth. i'd take truth over people any day. trust nothing, make blind moves. instinct is the only betrayal that is pure.~weepingprophet

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