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Array ( [sid] => 91560 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ... No ExCuSe ... [time] => 2005-04-20 00:36:35 [hometext] => something i scribbled down during a bout of self loathing!!!! Comments appreciated! [bodytext] => I am a bad person,
and I hate myself.
I can't even think...
I am that stupid.
I do inconceivable things,
with no excuse,
and i squirm under the pressure,
to cover my tracks.
I am consumed by guilt,
my heart constantly pounding,
with the fear that they will soon know...
that I will be laid bare,
exposed to them...
as they rip me apart.
A fit punishment for someone like me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Delusions [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
... No ExCuSe ...

Contributed by Delusions on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:36:35 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I am a bad person,
and I hate myself.
I can't even think...
I am that stupid.
I do inconceivable things,
with no excuse,
and i squirm under the pressure,
to cover my tracks.
I am consumed by guilt,
my heart constantly pounding,
with the fear that they will soon know...
that I will be laid bare,
exposed to them...
as they rip me apart.
A fit punishment for someone like me.




Copyright © Delusions ... [ 2005-04-20 00:36:35]
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Re: ... No ExCuSe ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:14:12 AM AEST
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awesome, well done


Re: ... No ExCuSe ... (User Rating: 1 )
by kylie_fan87 on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:54:42 AM AEST
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A very descriptive but brutal poem to yourself as the author. Your use of descriptive words really capture the punishment process that you feel you should endure for whatever reasons. This poem no doubt has allowed you to release the guilt that you mention and perhaps talking about it was enough punishment for yourself. Well done to you and your poem, perhaps now that you have released your guilt there will be no more tracks to cover:) Thankyou for sharing this poem with me.


Re: ... No ExCuSe ... (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:25:29 AM AEST
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heya hun,
i really like this poem coz i like the amount of emotion coming through the poem at me when i read it. i love how i can tell how ur felling when u write these and i know sometimes its hard to express what ur feeling but i love that u trust me and crystal enough to read into ur thoughts like this. ur vulnerability and fears, ur sadness and ur joy. thanks for showing me the real u.
love u huni.
beccaj!!


Re: ... No ExCuSe ... (User Rating: 1 )
by tWiStLe on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 09:49:19 PM AEST
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Iv felt like this b4 - its probably the worst feeling in the world cuz it drags along all the other horrible feelings that come along with it... reading this one made me feel that way again cuz its so real, strong and shows such raw emotion! *kisses*




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