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Array ( [sid] => 91535 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torn [time] => 2005-04-19 20:57:11 [hometext] => Torn between the heart and the head... [bodytext] => My heart is whispering yes,
My head is screaming no.
Some people tell me its ok,
Others tell me not to go.

I hate how I love you,
Yet how I feel such rage.
You've got me whipped, hands behind my back,
As if im locked in a cage.

Your manipulative words,
They draw me near.
For having to go back,
Loving you is my biggest fear.

You send hurtful blows,
Straight to my heart.
You like to peice me together,
Then tear me apart.

To you im just a game,
One you always win.
All of me hates you,
But love lies somewhere within.

You make my head spin with pain,
And my heart bleed with ache.
I hate you with a passion,
Loving you is a big mistake.

Tell me its over,
So I can walk in shame.
So you can say you've won,
And bask in all your fame.

And i'll lie awake,
Sleepless at night.
Hoping to hear your voice,
But shaking with fright.

How do you do it?
Somehow you make me feel this way.
Let me go and let me be,
But pretty please just stay.

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Torn

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My heart is whispering yes,
My head is screaming no.
Some people tell me its ok,
Others tell me not to go.

I hate how I love you,
Yet how I feel such rage.
You've got me whipped, hands behind my back,
As if im locked in a cage.

Your manipulative words,
They draw me near.
For having to go back,
Loving you is my biggest fear.

You send hurtful blows,
Straight to my heart.
You like to peice me together,
Then tear me apart.

To you im just a game,
One you always win.
All of me hates you,
But love lies somewhere within.

You make my head spin with pain,
And my heart bleed with ache.
I hate you with a passion,
Loving you is a big mistake.

Tell me its over,
So I can walk in shame.
So you can say you've won,
And bask in all your fame.

And i'll lie awake,
Sleepless at night.
Hoping to hear your voice,
But shaking with fright.

How do you do it?
Somehow you make me feel this way.
Let me go and let me be,
But pretty please just stay.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-04-19 20:57:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:28:32 PM AEST
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ah, you have excellent rhythmn and rhyme in this piece. its nice to read work from a very skilled writer.

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