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Array ( [sid] => 91512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cries of the Past [time] => 2005-04-19 19:05:58 [hometext] => I think this is how to explain what it feels like to lose love. Like a car wreck where the one your love dies. I hope you all like it. It is the best I Could come up with. Kinda Long. PlzComment. Maj [bodytext] => -----------__________---------------------

It happened all so fast heavy with sleep my eyes closed
the next thing i remember was crawling out from the car and
seeing you lying there
holdin your head kissing you for the last time
the taste of blood on my lips
your clothes torn apart perfumed with gas
it seems like it was yesterday when the rain poured down

i can still hear your screams as if it was happening all over again
saturday, April 16th that night would become a grave
that would crush my heart
joy and laughter exchanged for grief and silence
searching for so long to fnd you and the moment
you were ripped from me

laying here on this empty shelf never to be read again
in these pages lies every memory of you
the wind blew your heart over my eyes and i slept for days
praying not to awake, but these dreams can only last so long

facing the day looking through these tears
i'll always look back and remember that night as you lay there
looking over that casket seeing your face
times of past rushing
touching your cold hand wishing it woudl touch me back
you look so pretty lying there just like the first day we met

it feels so real like old times but it's nothing, it's nothing
i can taste the stale air on my tongue and death lights up the sky
hope finds itself it and ends stopping at my thoughts

pictures of you help bring back the tears
walking in the present but living in the past
how much longer will i embrace sorrow?

from the moment you entered my life
my whole outlook on love would change
you brought out a happiness i didn't even know i had
and now you've gone leaving without a goodbye

that glass heart that rested in my chest has fallen and shattered
here my love is the remains of a broken heart
for i have faith you can give me joy and life again
death has fallen but love covers me
heaven is now home to my angel of love
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Cries of the Past

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:05:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



-----------__________---------------------

It happened all so fast heavy with sleep my eyes closed
the next thing i remember was crawling out from the car and
seeing you lying there
holdin your head kissing you for the last time
the taste of blood on my lips
your clothes torn apart perfumed with gas
it seems like it was yesterday when the rain poured down

i can still hear your screams as if it was happening all over again
saturday, April 16th that night would become a grave
that would crush my heart
joy and laughter exchanged for grief and silence
searching for so long to fnd you and the moment
you were ripped from me

laying here on this empty shelf never to be read again
in these pages lies every memory of you
the wind blew your heart over my eyes and i slept for days
praying not to awake, but these dreams can only last so long

facing the day looking through these tears
i'll always look back and remember that night as you lay there
looking over that casket seeing your face
times of past rushing
touching your cold hand wishing it woudl touch me back
you look so pretty lying there just like the first day we met

it feels so real like old times but it's nothing, it's nothing
i can taste the stale air on my tongue and death lights up the sky
hope finds itself it and ends stopping at my thoughts

pictures of you help bring back the tears
walking in the present but living in the past
how much longer will i embrace sorrow?

from the moment you entered my life
my whole outlook on love would change
you brought out a happiness i didn't even know i had
and now you've gone leaving without a goodbye

that glass heart that rested in my chest has fallen and shattered
here my love is the remains of a broken heart
for i have faith you can give me joy and life again
death has fallen but love covers me
heaven is now home to my angel of love




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-04-19 19:05:58]
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Re: Cries of the Past (User Rating: 1 )
by brokengirl on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 09:23:46 PM AEST
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aww its so good. sad and cute. I like it a lot. great poem

-hailey




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