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Array ( [sid] => 91510 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Letter [time] => 2005-04-19 18:44:50 [hometext] => The Final Farewell in another lost relationship! [bodytext] => ---------___________--------------------

Just got in, I got your note in my hands
It say's you just can't take it
You just can't stand it you're leaving again
The last line is torn from your letter I wonder just what it said
I can't imagine that you could just leave
With the last word still in your head

One day you'll see he's no better than me
I hope you'll be back again
One day you'll see that it's not only me
One day I hope you'll be back again

You just walked in got my heart in your hands
But you just can't see me
I'm standing here bleeding for you
again!

One day you'll see he's no better than me
I can see you'll be back again
One day you'll see that it's not only me
I can see you coming back again

Why can't we work it out - Why can't we talk it out
Got your words in my hands

One day you'll see their no better than me
Please come back again
One day you'll see that it's not only me
Why cant you just come back again?

You just got in got my note in your hands
It say's I just can't take it I just can't stand it
We can leave again!
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Your Letter

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:44:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



---------___________--------------------

Just got in, I got your note in my hands
It say's you just can't take it
You just can't stand it you're leaving again
The last line is torn from your letter I wonder just what it said
I can't imagine that you could just leave
With the last word still in your head

One day you'll see he's no better than me
I hope you'll be back again
One day you'll see that it's not only me
One day I hope you'll be back again

You just walked in got my heart in your hands
But you just can't see me
I'm standing here bleeding for you
again!

One day you'll see he's no better than me
I can see you'll be back again
One day you'll see that it's not only me
I can see you coming back again

Why can't we work it out - Why can't we talk it out
Got your words in my hands

One day you'll see their no better than me
Please come back again
One day you'll see that it's not only me
Why cant you just come back again?

You just got in got my note in your hands
It say's I just can't take it I just can't stand it
We can leave again!




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-04-19 18:44:50]
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Re: Your Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:51:51 PM AEST
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2 thumbs up,awesome write

savedbydeath (R*J)


Re: Your Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:08:14 PM AEST
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it. I hope you also read my others and see if you like them too. I cover a wide genre of writes. Love, Lost Love, Dark, etc.. Thanks again for the comment I appreciate it.

MaJ


Re: Your Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:24:39 PM AEST
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wow this is good! I'm also in your position so I know how you feel. Great write and five stars from me!

~Brenna~




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