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Array ( [sid] => 91479 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Virgin Love [time] => 2005-04-19 14:41:44 [hometext] => This is really private... its ... about more than just love, its more than love.......alot of love [bodytext] => Guardians, Defenders, Protectors of heart,
I grant thy power to rip mine apart.

Past to present, Honor to shame,
A token of absence, A sight of fame.

A love from another, Is a coil of rain,
Wrapped around my sins, I'm crying again.

I see a future, where there was no space,
I see your feelings when I look at your face.

Virgins of romance, A Theory for life,
My sword, My Kilt, My Ring, My Wife.

Give me a chance, I see the light,
Don't turn your back I wish to keep sight.

Touch me, Feel me, Consume my love,
As this is the first I've loved somone who fell from above. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 675 [topic] => 2 [informant] => nos_bunny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 114 [ratings] => 24 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Virgin Love

Contributed by nos_bunny on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:41:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Guardians, Defenders, Protectors of heart,
I grant thy power to rip mine apart.

Past to present, Honor to shame,
A token of absence, A sight of fame.

A love from another, Is a coil of rain,
Wrapped around my sins, I'm crying again.

I see a future, where there was no space,
I see your feelings when I look at your face.

Virgins of romance, A Theory for life,
My sword, My Kilt, My Ring, My Wife.

Give me a chance, I see the light,
Don't turn your back I wish to keep sight.

Touch me, Feel me, Consume my love,
As this is the first I've loved somone who fell from above.

Copyright Â© nos_bunny ... [ 2005-04-19 14:41:44]
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Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Unbreakable on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:52:21 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. The way you express your love is so innocent, maybe even a little niave, and your feelings and openness toward it is beautiful. Very good write.

Krystal

Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DoomedCuthulu on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:35:17 PM AEST
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I know what you mean. All too well ¬_¬

Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Snookles on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:22:34 AM AEST
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Because I know U wrote this for and about me, I am a bit lost for words. What I can say is that I love you beyond all ur imagation and I am Eternily yours, Snookles

Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 08:32:03 PM AEST
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beautiful poem mj ,ruthy x

Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by EROTICADARLIN on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:29:07 AM AEST
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I ENJOYED READIN THIS! YOU EXPRESS YOURSELF WELL IN YOUR WORK. KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB!!

Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:40:10 PM AEST
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Marcus!!! 82 people have viewed!!! omg ! *hugs* Congrats....ruthy xXx

Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PrissEru on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:17:54 AM AEST
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Very good. I seen a lot of emotion into it. I like it very much. :D

Re: Virgin Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Nos_Bunny on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:34:49 AM AEST
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I guess this is my best poem I have for now guys -tries to beat the comments, reads and votes-

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