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Array ( [sid] => 91477 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Wish [time] => 2005-04-19 14:30:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Death, depression,
darkness and gloom
All abiding within this room
I take the object
of death and hurt
and gouge it into my arm
The blood slides out
red and warm
falling to rest
in a shadowy puddle
on the ground
I cray out loud
and grab my wrist
Now all I have left
is just one wish
I'm dying now,
going behind a veil
a place where only
time can tell
I'm vanishing, erasing myself
soon to be no more
than a memory
But my one wish
is only this
I may be gone
but memories
can't die
I can still see
that look
and the way you started
to cry
I don't want to hurt you
I dont know why I did this
I'm aching for the scars
and memories
to fall into a dark abyss
You should have never held
me close to you
I should have walked away
For now I have hurt you worse
than if I was a nobody

~Kortnie~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 36 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

One Wish

Contributed by justme03 on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:30:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Death, depression,
darkness and gloom
All abiding within this room
I take the object
of death and hurt
and gouge it into my arm
The blood slides out
red and warm
falling to rest
in a shadowy puddle
on the ground
I cray out loud
and grab my wrist
Now all I have left
is just one wish
I'm dying now,
going behind a veil
a place where only
time can tell
I'm vanishing, erasing myself
soon to be no more
than a memory
But my one wish
is only this
I may be gone
but memories
can't die
I can still see
that look
and the way you started
to cry
I don't want to hurt you
I dont know why I did this
I'm aching for the scars
and memories
to fall into a dark abyss
You should have never held
me close to you
I should have walked away
For now I have hurt you worse
than if I was a nobody

~Kortnie~

Copyright © justme03 ... [ 2005-04-19 14:30:04]
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Re: One Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:53:50 PM AEST
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Thats Deep...
_Courtney
~XOXO~

Re: One Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by WideEyedFrog on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:34:53 PM AEST
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This ones very good. I realy like this one, its deeep....

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