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Array ( [sid] => 91462 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the kid that gets your girl [time] => 2005-04-19 12:02:38 [hometext] => this one's about the guy who's better than you. To me there's alot of those in this world, so i thought i write about it. i really wanna know what you think! please, please comment! [bodytext] => this blasphomous humour,
in which you display,
cruelty surrounds it,
beside your dismay;
you say love is blind,
then why aren't I?

true that truth is hard to find,
world that relys,
world that lives-
will not compromise.

same sad looser,
winning again,
tatics, eliquite refrain,
found to hate it.

its never me,
im never free,
you got your joy,
got your boy,
refrigerating toy,
holds your heart,
to which no art,
keep it cold.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Blank [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

the kid that gets your girl

Contributed by Blank on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 12:02:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

this blasphomous humour,
in which you display,
cruelty surrounds it,
beside your dismay;
you say love is blind,
then why aren't I?

true that truth is hard to find,
world that relys,
world that lives-
will not compromise.

same sad looser,
winning again,
tatics, eliquite refrain,
found to hate it.

its never me,
im never free,
you got your joy,
got your boy,
refrigerating toy,
holds your heart,
to which no art,
keep it cold.

Copyright © Blank ... [ 2005-04-19 12:02:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the kid that gets your girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Onslaught on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 12:37:25 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot, especially this part -

"you say love is blind,
then why aren't I?"

I know exactly what you mean. I've always been the guy left behind. Everyone I have ever cared about was already taken. This is angry and sad. Good write.

Re: the kid that gets your girl (User Rating: 1 )
by tortured_soul on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:31:26 PM AEST
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Wow, that was beautiful. Even though i'm a girl i still love the poem, it's a 10 (on a 1-10 scale)

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