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Array ( [sid] => 91447 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ghostly Dance Of Death [time] => 2005-04-19 02:36:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you said it was over
and walked away
I trembled I moaned
and endured the pain
and just when the memory
of the pain fades
your ghost returns
and
whispers to me.

Invisible chains of doubt
silently scream out
cause now you've changed your mind,
I open the door once again
as your essence
causes Illusions making me blind.
The winds of change are blowing
once again you have no time
as I see your ghost fading
A single tear drops from my eye.

Tears of confusion
rolling down my face
drowning me
leaving a bitter taste,
emotionally
I am dead
now I decompose
and oh so slowly decay. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Ghostly Dance Of Death

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:36:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

you said it was over
and walked away
I trembled I moaned
and endured the pain
and just when the memory
of the pain fades
your ghost returns
and
whispers to me.

Invisible chains of doubt
silently scream out
cause now you've changed your mind,
I open the door once again
as your essence
causes Illusions making me blind.
The winds of change are blowing
once again you have no time
as I see your ghost fading
A single tear drops from my eye.

Tears of confusion
rolling down my face
drowning me
leaving a bitter taste,
emotionally
I am dead
now I decompose
and oh so slowly decay.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2005-04-19 02:36:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ghostly Dance Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:56:22 AM AEST
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this was a sad poem and very heart touching, it made me feel for the pain you are going through (if this is about you) but pleases dont give up there are others out there that will take you and help you mend your wounded heart, if ever you need to talk just PM me and I will see what I can do for you. dont give up and God bless.

P.S. this was a very good poem I liked how it expressed your emotions.

Re: Ghostly Dance Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:15:36 AM AEST
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Very sad, almost makes me cry.
Great writing as always.
huggs,
emy

Re: Ghostly Dance Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:56:51 AM AEST
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"as I see your ghost fading ...a single tear drops from my eye"..excellent expression..
very sad, very good work. god bless ..keep writing on. venkat

Re: Ghostly Dance Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:59:43 PM AEST
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Sad poem hun.
But I promise you,
I won't leave you.. . . .
I LOVE YOU. . . .
I'm sorry if you feel that way....
beautiful write hun.
*~givingin~*

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