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SultryRose's Signatures

That night in the ambulence she saw
a white Knight for the first time.
With heavenly touch brushed her
cheek. The chains that had her bound
so strong fell. As the Knight revived her
heart to let it breath. The knight that
touched found the key. Instantly
she found life for the first time.

She saw her Knights from heaven
as her Lancelot took her there
as she lay down to die.
Jesus said well done. It
wasn't your fault.

She choose to come back to
Earth in human form 'cause
her youngest angel sat by
her side holding her up while
she had to decide.

Even tho evil had tried she
came back to Earth 'cause
there was too many left behind
she dearly luved.

After her Dr's Mai tai cocktail, (legal Meds)
wore off some days later she came around.
She realized how those super natural beings
walked freely amongst us.

end part 3 and there's one more part 4

[comments] => 10 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 36 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

SUICIDE part 3

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:36:37 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

SultryRose's Signatures

That night in the ambulence she saw
a white Knight for the first time.
With heavenly touch brushed her
cheek. The chains that had her bound
so strong fell. As the Knight revived her
heart to let it breath. The knight that
touched found the key. Instantly
she found life for the first time.

She saw her Knights from heaven
as her Lancelot took her there
as she lay down to die.
Jesus said well done. It
wasn't your fault.

She choose to come back to
Earth in human form 'cause
her youngest angel sat by
her side holding her up while
she had to decide.

Even tho evil had tried she
came back to Earth 'cause
there was too many left behind
she dearly luved.

After her Dr's Mai tai cocktail, (legal Meds)
wore off some days later she came around.
She realized how those super natural beings
walked freely amongst us.

end part 3 and there's one more part 4

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2005-04-19 02:36:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:49:48 AM AEST
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this was as good as its predecessors, I am seeing the light at the end of the tunal from hear but it could still be along way off, I do hope that it is closer then it appears, truly young angles of earth are worth living for and pleases do live on for them if no one ales. God bless.

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:07:29 AM AEST
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Great story telling..very lovely read ;-)venkat

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:42:55 AM AEST
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Excellent work, Emy.... Can't wait to read past 4....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by reflections on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:45:24 AM AEST
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Fast coming to an eventful ending. Seems like I’ll have to gather in part #4 in order to receive the complete message. Enjoyable write.

Cheers
John

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:31:05 AM AEST
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Well done Emy these series of poems are absolutely great. Can't wait 2 read the 4th part.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:37:50 AM AEST
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Awesome, really awesome.

Scott

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:05:31 AM AEST
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gripping stuff, i was gonna cheat and read part 4 first! I used to do that when i was a kid get a book and read the ending first lol!

Johnny.

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:59:10 AM AEST
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Fantastic pic !! Tremendous words !!!

Nazzy ~
( wasting no time ... off to 4 )

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:33:23 PM AEST
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To watch over us and help us when we are down..........This is so deep, Emy.....and so truthful..........a joy to read, and pray it will help someone change their mind. We are losing people everyday (especially teenager without any hope)
Keep up the good work.
I love you
momconsue

Re: SUICIDE part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:14:53 AM AEST
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Very intresting piece this work is coming together..

--amanda--

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