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Array ( [sid] => 91444 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark Desire [time] => 2005-04-19 02:09:48 [hometext] => just had to write this. I know that it wont suit everones taste but please do enjoy. comments welcome [bodytext] => Dark desire

I lick my lips
Caress my hips
Just wishing you were there

I smell your aroma
It sends me in to a coma
The weight of you I’d gladly bear

Your texture your feel
Your smell your appeal
I need you in the worst way

Dark, glossy shine
I’ll make you mine
You will make me happier than gay

It is a sin what you do
Causing all to desire only you
But away from you I will not budge

Until you are ready
I will be steady
When will it be done, the fudge?
[comments] => 10 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Shishke_Bob [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 43 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Dark Desire

Contributed by Shishke_Bob on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:09:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Dark desire

I lick my lips
Caress my hips
Just wishing you were there

I smell your aroma
It sends me in to a coma
The weight of you I’d gladly bear

Your texture your feel
Your smell your appeal
I need you in the worst way

Dark, glossy shine
I’ll make you mine
You will make me happier than gay

It is a sin what you do
Causing all to desire only you
But away from you I will not budge

Until you are ready
I will be steady
When will it be done, the fudge?

Copyright Â© Shishke_Bob ... [ 2005-04-19 02:09:48]
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Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:16:35 AM AEST
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Great write ! but here i was thinking you were talking about....somthing else lol

Leia

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 02:30:31 AM AEST
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I have had these same thoughts about someone. It's like I had u write this for her. I like it.

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:12:37 AM AEST
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Very cute. Luv your sense of humor.
huggs,
emy

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:02:02 AM AEST
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I like the thought of the poem but in some places it feels like you've cut some parts out.

I dont get the poem, sorry. It just might be me *shrugs*

Jane~

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 11:59:31 PM AEST
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Haha I didn't get this at first, but this was
really good. You get a 10 out of 10 for
uniqueness and I also like how it was written.
I'm glad I read this since it is good to read
different stuff every now and then.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:01:12 PM AEST
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Shish, you've got issues. I mean there's obsession and all that, but then there's this, and this is like stalking scary, or something like that. You have to have patience. It'll (She'll???) be ready for you on its own time. About 45 minutes? Something like that.
Anyway, I do like your writing style, if you get more 'poems' (sacrilege!) out there, I might just become a fan. Keep up the... the work, the...good work. There I said it.
Gosh I ramble. It's longer that your poem, almost.
Take care, Ke.
David

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:55:05 PM AEST
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lmao!!!!!

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 06:46:54 PM AEST
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Oh too cute! You really had me there....all the way 'til the last line! Very, very good. I think this is a brilliant piece of prose....now about that fudge....I live in Florida..... : )

Carol (A confessed chocoholic)

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:34:48 AM AEST
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Ah...I got you..."fudge" eh...*wink wink*...*nudge nudge*...you perv.

Re: Dark Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:19:16 PM AEST
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Well done..I have a few of this type of poems myself....
I enjoyed this
Jenni

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