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Time is forever

yet is never here for long

Only if your clever

You'll treasure it before its gone

~~~~~~~~Brendah Burns

SultryRose's Signatures

continued from part 1

Aaaahhh but Jesus knew something that
Satan couldn't know. A secret only
two angels knew. The midnight
angels. Two were dispatched in-luv.
Ambulence sent straite from
Jesus in-luv.

Was Jesus eyes. Worked in
prayer to save her life.
When his gentle hand touched
her she knew this mighty angel
came from above. She had flatlined
but he pulled her thru.

When in hospital she saw angels
passing at the foot of that
hospital bed. She asked her
nurse, Why do I feel like I died
and went to heaven? She laughed and
said, Well at least u went to the right
place.

The angels still flashed before her.
In the Dr. with many faces, she
saw her Mom. Every angel she knew
both on Earth and deceased was there.
All her accuser except two demons
that pushed her to death by destroying
her last ounce of confidence. Their evil lies
left her children with hate.

Them devils pulled her children
in the pit with that evil hiss.
Just as they grabbed the next one
She screamed, Hell no! You evil
snake, not my baby too!

end part 2
[comments] => 12 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 36 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

SUICIDE part 2

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 11:33:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Time is forever

yet is never here for long

Only if your clever

You'll treasure it before its gone

~~~~~~~~Brendah Burns

SultryRose's Signatures

continued from part 1

Aaaahhh but Jesus knew something that
Satan couldn't know. A secret only
two angels knew. The midnight
angels. Two were dispatched in-luv.
Ambulence sent straite from
Jesus in-luv.

Was Jesus eyes. Worked in
prayer to save her life.
When his gentle hand touched
her she knew this mighty angel
came from above. She had flatlined
but he pulled her thru.

When in hospital she saw angels
passing at the foot of that
hospital bed. She asked her
nurse, Why do I feel like I died
and went to heaven? She laughed and
said, Well at least u went to the right
place.

The angels still flashed before her.
In the Dr. with many faces, she
saw her Mom. Every angel she knew
both on Earth and deceased was there.
All her accuser except two demons
that pushed her to death by destroying
her last ounce of confidence. Their evil lies
left her children with hate.

Them devils pulled her children
in the pit with that evil hiss.
Just as they grabbed the next one
She screamed, Hell no! You evil
snake, not my baby too!

end part 2

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-04-18 23:33:55]
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Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:53:28 AM AEST
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Emystar did it again! A beautiful write.

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:59:58 AM AEST
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whow. this was very emotional from the first, but it was doen so well that I still want to know more( I do hope that you will finish these ones soon) it is very sad what is happining to her and I do hope that it isnt you and if it is just know that God will be with you forever. even if we are not. God bless.

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:36:07 AM AEST
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Keep 'em coming grrlfriend...
Hugs and Pecae,
Jenni

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by reflections on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:39:54 AM AEST
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Still interested. Good writing makes for good reads. I see #3 has been posted, so off I go to finish my quest. Good use of a good imagination, emy. Kudos!

Cheers
John

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:21:17 AM AEST
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Emy u r so amazing. Your work is absolutely sensational. So much truth lays behind the lines. Sheer divine as always.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:33:20 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful.

Scott

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:21:48 PM AEST
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Still waiting impatioentleyh for the "devouement" as the French call it.
Meanwhile I also love the heading, i.e.

Time is forever

yet is never here for long

Only if your clever

You'll treasure it before its gone

~~~~~~~~Brendah Burns
Love and peace
Elizabeth

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:03:10 AM AEST
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good stuff again emy i'm off to read parts 3 and 4...

Johnny.

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:55:03 AM AEST
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You always manage to steal my breath away with your presentations ... The pictures, songs and powerful words ...

Nazzy ~
( headed for the others )

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:37:42 PM AEST
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And just God uses good people to do good, Satan uses bad people to kill others.......if only everyone were aware of that fact, there would be less of killings, murders and suicide.
Satan has hid himself for thousands years, and has convinced almost everyone on earth that it is God that is taking them.......but instead it is He Himself!
Soon he will be gone.........what a wonderful hope for mankind.
This was excellent little emy, I proud of you
momconsue

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:48:45 AM AEST
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Great second part to an obviously important story.

Re: SUICIDE part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:12:14 AM AEST
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Beautiful and powerful I can't wait to find out what happens.

--amanda--

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