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Lemon is Bitter, Revenge is Sweet
Contributed by
Eclipse
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Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:36:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Cut me deep, just cause me pain,
Slash open scars yet once again,
Let me bleed, let me burn,
I've run my race, it's now your turn
Scars can fade, but words will stay,
Trapped in a place I can't wish away,
But now I'm strong, and now I'll fight,
No tears shall fall from me tonight
I tried to try, but I'd always fall,
Never good enough for you at all,
Now listen up close, I've found my voice,
Stand back now, you have no choice
Lemon is bitter, revenge is sweet,
Hurt me again and the end you'll meet,
No longer am I that little girl lost,
I'm growing up fast, and I paid my cost
So you wish I'd leave and never come back,
Answer me this, what was is it I lack,
I try to try, is that not enough,
Trust me now, I've had it rough
But no longer shall I ever feel pain,
Tears will no longer be lost in rain,
I'm warning you now, I shall repeat,
Lemon is bitter, but revenge is sweet.
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Eclipse
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Re: Lemon is Bitter, Revenge is Sweet
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticLicense on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:32:34 PM AEST (User
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Good attempt and expression.
but Revenge is bitterness itself. |
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Re: Lemon is Bitter, Revenge is Sweet
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 07:29:35 AM AEST (User
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Love it!! You expressed yourself very well in this write, and kept a good flow with a solid rhyme scheme...You draw the reader in with the opening line, and keep their interest throughout...and then deliver that final blow at the end! Keep it up...this reminds me of some of my older writes with regards to emotions, and the style it was written in. I enjoyed this: )
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