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what is enough?

Contributed by spazz911 on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:23:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I could do it
I know now I could
but the question is will I?
am I that scared?
would I stop this hell?
or live and move on?
because those are my options
crystal and clear
to live is to die
to die is to be free
well I hope thats what would end up to me
because I have done wrong
I've been shallow and lied
its all drawn out on paper
and I could prove every lie
I'm afraid to live
I'm afraid to die
or maybe its the dying not the death
but still I'd feel won
I wouldn't feel strong
I'd feel abused and a coward
not to stick it all out
when I have no cause
because I just feel like crap
and that all the reason I feel
I've handled the rest
the pain and the death
so thats all that is left the feeling of crap
so we'll see what happens
when the time goes by
whether there is enough to live
we'll soon find out why






Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-04-18 21:23:45]
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Re: what is enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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a little confusing... but i know you wouldnt do anything because i dont think you're that kind of person. you have too much going for you (believe it or not) to make a stupid mistake like that. stay strong,
luv n hugs,
jennie*


Re: what is enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:47:47 PM AEST
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Your sense of despair is evident, as you ponder your choices. Yeah, and I like the lines about being afraid to live and to die. What to do when both choices are none too desirable. Insightful, but a little uneven in the reading. Still, nice job. (I trust Jennie's judgement that you are not ready to make that choice just yet).




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