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All of the hurt you’ve known.
But it hurts to see you talk as if,
You’re used to being alone.

I know that something makes you smile,
But I can’t get you to say.
It’s hard to try to help you,
With all these miles in my way.

You say life is just a cheater,
But little do you know,
That you leave a little fair and square,
Everywhere you go.

I just wanna try to help you,
Mostly because I care.
And Also because, If I were you,
I’d wanna be in someone’s prayers.

But the fact is, I’m not you,
So I cannot see within.
It’s not like I can just open your mind,
And let myself right in.

But I can give you this message,
It’s just something I’d like to point out.
It’s a message that will help you understand,
What life is really about.

Life is all about beauty;
Sunsets prove that true.
Life is all about family,
Because they’ll always love you too.

You can hate the paths you’ve taken in life,
You can hate what the journeys will do.
But soon you’ll finally realize,
The one who drew the map was you.

Time is the beauty of the road being long.
Life is that driving range.
Life is how far you can hit a baseball,
And nothing endures, but change.

Baby, you only get one life.
And I just want to see you live.
I don’t care what you’ve done,
God is willing to forgive.

All I can do is pray for you,
Prayer always worked for me.
Look for things you like in life,
There’s gotta be more than three.

As your “special person”, I’ll always care.
As your friend, I’ll always be here.
Please just know that smiles and time,
Make the pain and hurt disappear. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jacobskk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I Care

Contributed by jacobskk on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 08:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I don’t think I can comprehend,
All of the hurt you’ve known.
But it hurts to see you talk as if,
You’re used to being alone.

I know that something makes you smile,
But I can’t get you to say.
It’s hard to try to help you,
With all these miles in my way.

You say life is just a cheater,
But little do you know,
That you leave a little fair and square,
Everywhere you go.

I just wanna try to help you,
Mostly because I care.
And Also because, If I were you,
I’d wanna be in someone’s prayers.

But the fact is, I’m not you,
So I cannot see within.
It’s not like I can just open your mind,
And let myself right in.

But I can give you this message,
It’s just something I’d like to point out.
It’s a message that will help you understand,
What life is really about.

Life is all about beauty;
Sunsets prove that true.
Life is all about family,
Because they’ll always love you too.

You can hate the paths you’ve taken in life,
You can hate what the journeys will do.
But soon you’ll finally realize,
The one who drew the map was you.

Time is the beauty of the road being long.
Life is that driving range.
Life is how far you can hit a baseball,
And nothing endures, but change.

Baby, you only get one life.
And I just want to see you live.
I don’t care what you’ve done,
God is willing to forgive.

All I can do is pray for you,
Prayer always worked for me.
Look for things you like in life,
There’s gotta be more than three.

As your “special person”, I’ll always care.
As your friend, I’ll always be here.
Please just know that smiles and time,
Make the pain and hurt disappear.

Copyright Â© jacobskk ... [ 2005-04-18 20:23:16]
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Re: I Care (User Rating: 1 )
by FlirtQueen on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 08:58:56 PM AEST
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Loved it.....it was a great poem, keep it up...!!!

Re: I Care (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:18:49 AM AEST
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that is, truely awesome!
And i am just wondering, may i use this to send to the one i love right now who has some self difficulties? I just really want to let him know i want to help him, and give him encouragement. We've had to break up over it :( until he can sort himself out, there still may be hope for us...but i will truely do anything to help him see the beauty, the light, and what's real! Your words were perfect!
May i please send this to him?

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