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Array ( [sid] => 91369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Morning Of Realization [time] => 2005-04-18 15:00:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Lost without hope,
I cannot seem to cope
With all of thses feelings i hold inside
Always im asking why
Why do i cry
Ending it with a heavy sigh
Trying to breath, but emotionless now

All the feelings cried out
Till i cant remember what im crying about
Why must i hurt myself to stop this pain
Either im cutting or putting a blade in the flame
Pressing against my skin
trying to stop everything within
Killing the parts in me thats a sin
Just everything i feel, where do i begin

I've lost it all
Im begining to fall
Its starting again
Why,.....Why,..?
And i cant do anything

I dont want to feel this way
Why cant I make it stop,
Just stop
I cant make it stop
It never will
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Morning Of Realization

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 03:00:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Lost without hope,
I cannot seem to cope
With all of thses feelings i hold inside
Always im asking why
Why do i cry
Ending it with a heavy sigh
Trying to breath, but emotionless now

All the feelings cried out
Till i cant remember what im crying about
Why must i hurt myself to stop this pain
Either im cutting or putting a blade in the flame
Pressing against my skin
trying to stop everything within
Killing the parts in me thats a sin
Just everything i feel, where do i begin

I've lost it all
Im begining to fall
Its starting again
Why,.....Why,..?
And i cant do anything

I dont want to feel this way
Why cant I make it stop,
Just stop
I cant make it stop
It never will

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2005-04-18 15:00:47]
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Re: Morning Of Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 03:33:27 PM AEST
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emotional intentse write
Michelle

Re: Morning Of Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 07:55:41 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. for me, this hell will never stop. The pain will never end until both of us are in our graves and we provide a banquet for the worms. This was a extremely well written poem and remember that you are not the only one suffering!

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