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Array ( [sid] => 91321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Happiness [time] => 2005-04-17 21:55:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My eyes are shot with blood and stuff
Dried and tired, sagging low
My stamina has fallen
And my head is hanging so

My car, a wrech
Put through a tree
My brother's gift
He gave to me

With little money and bigger debts
A trip already planned
Sets me back even more and more
A glimpse of a life unbland

I still press on
And times get tough
Two cars are broke
There's too much stuff

The other bro
Sells drugs and steals
Takes me along
On even deals

I've seen the bad
I've seen the worse
For when can I
Recieve the worst

To get it over
To pass it by
I want what I
Is rightufuly mine... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 63 [informant] => lifefliesby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

Happiness

Contributed by lifefliesby on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:55:25 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

My eyes are shot with blood and stuff
Dried and tired, sagging low
My stamina has fallen
And my head is hanging so

My car, a wrech
Put through a tree
My brother's gift
He gave to me

With little money and bigger debts
A trip already planned
Sets me back even more and more
A glimpse of a life unbland

I still press on
And times get tough
Two cars are broke
There's too much stuff

The other bro
Sells drugs and steals
Takes me along
On even deals

I've seen the bad
I've seen the worse
For when can I
Recieve the worst

To get it over
To pass it by
I want what I
Is rightufuly mine...

Copyright © lifefliesby ... [ 2005-04-17 21:55:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:44:41 PM AEST
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I've read this before, but I guess I never commented on it. It's honest and pretty descriptive. Good write. I hope you don't feel so bad anymore, though. I hope you get back to writing someday, I miss reading your new poems every now and then.

Love always,

Chelsea

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