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Array ( [sid] => 91320 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Someome stop me [time] => 2005-04-17 21:53:56 [hometext] => i need to be stopped [bodytext] => Someone save me from this powerful web
the world is open but i am inwpt
I never thought that it would be like this
but i was young then and nothing was amiss
my hearts been broken, but no one cared
I cried my eyes out, but no one was there
you never knew me you only judged
Try feeling like this when your unloved
When's all this torture going to end?
I need to know now, my life depends
Please tip this balence, I need it to end
I'm going to hell now let the pain begin
Some one stop me, make my cycle end
Its getting deadly, this game I'm in
Pretty soon now, its getting late
I'd hate to have it end this way
Its getting later I'm losing control
My heart ain't open, I've plugged the hole
I need to be fished out of this mess
Taken away before I regret... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 13 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Someome stop me

Contributed by spazz911 on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Someone save me from this powerful web
the world is open but i am inwpt
I never thought that it would be like this
but i was young then and nothing was amiss
my hearts been broken, but no one cared
I cried my eyes out, but no one was there
you never knew me you only judged
Try feeling like this when your unloved
When's all this torture going to end?
I need to know now, my life depends
Please tip this balence, I need it to end
I'm going to hell now let the pain begin
Some one stop me, make my cycle end
Its getting deadly, this game I'm in
Pretty soon now, its getting late
I'd hate to have it end this way
Its getting later I'm losing control
My heart ain't open, I've plugged the hole
I need to be fished out of this mess
Taken away before I regret...

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-04-17 21:53:56]
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Re: Someome stop me (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:58:26 PM AEST
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kc... dont you do nething stupid like me. i will stop you, i will tie you down and duct tape your mouth if need be... i luv ya cas, without you id have absolutely no reasons left to live and id die too. id kill myself, you die i die remember?
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: Someome stop me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 08:44:00 PM AEST
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Hello, This Poem is very Deep.. it makes me want to cry.. b.c I have been there before and probaly still there, well you don't need to do anything.. like end your life with out a fight.. b.c then you'd know that this phycotic life has won.. and crap like that.. and I'm sure your friends don't want you to do anything stupid or they would die! Please don't do anything stupid.. just remeber don't end your life without a fight !

Re: Someome stop me (User Rating: 1 )
by crazygirl on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:29:34 PM AEST
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this is exactly how i feel about my life. Its awesome, and really good

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