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Array ( [sid] => 9119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Depths [time] => 2002-12-23 10:00:00 [hometext] => A very mysterious poem. [bodytext] => Visceral, charming whisper,
Arises, from the depths,
Of self, doggedly on impulse,
Without minds' radiation!

So, only for confusion,
To raise its echoes aloud,
Equivocal as can be,
Till minds suffer great divide!

It seems the chain of echoes,
Cling onto time tirelessly,
Bind the neck of souls,
Vanquish the spirits of fire!

It must be the waves of warmth,
Lost within the crimson sight,
That leaves the rays of darkness,
Beyond the hands of covers!

Depths, be gone!
Be gone forever!
Your field's day is over!

*****************************

Then, silence, frozen in time,
But depths, haven't cross the line,
Thoughts whirling around its mind,
For souls to click on the kill switch...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 49 [informant] => ronald [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Depths

Contributed by ronald on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Visceral, charming whisper,
Arises, from the depths,
Of self, doggedly on impulse,
Without minds' radiation!

So, only for confusion,
To raise its echoes aloud,
Equivocal as can be,
Till minds suffer great divide!

It seems the chain of echoes,
Cling onto time tirelessly,
Bind the neck of souls,
Vanquish the spirits of fire!

It must be the waves of warmth,
Lost within the crimson sight,
That leaves the rays of darkness,
Beyond the hands of covers!

Depths, be gone!
Be gone forever!
Your field's day is over!

*****************************

Then, silence, frozen in time,
But depths, haven't cross the line,
Thoughts whirling around its mind,
For souls to click on the kill switch...

Copyright © ronald ... [ 2002-12-23 10:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Depths (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 09:17:35 AM AEST
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this is a very fascinating poem you have written here. it has depth just like in the title! hehe! thanks for sharing it.

Re: Depths (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:15:01 PM AEST
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Out of all your poems that I've read, I'd have to say that this is my favourite. Well done and don't ever put that pen down because you write beautiful stuff.

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